The supreme sovereign system

Hey author,i like you work but at the beginning you have typo and grammar errors.since im idle i edited it for you for free,if you want it,ill send it via email.its only chapter 1 today coz its already 2 am here,maybe i do some more later

you all should give this one a try. i enjoy it very much ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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This is a great novel. Keep up the good work. . ...................... .................. .................. .................. ...........

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Honestly I couldn't make it through 10 chapters, grammatical and syntax errors make it literally painful to read. Plot seems interesting enough to be feasible, but the cringe factor over powers all.

at the beginning the story was slow, riddled with grammatical errors but recently the story writing and characters are being slowly developing my heart is racing in anticipation to new chapters

A really enjoyable story as i kinda got into army building/kingdom building novels i can say this novel is a really good one ... there are some problems tho ...1.The author sometimes forgets his vocabulary and writes sentences that make no sense well it doesnt matter alot cause you can understand what they are trying to say in the next sentence hope there is some improvement there :) ...2. World building is great but i would like a chapter specifically for information about the world (kinda trivial but necessary) slow development is also needed since our main character will need to fight enemies like his own blood so yeah that ofc isn't accurate since the story just started 3.Characters design is great the personalities fit them i would like more dialogue with the wolves i'm sure we will see that in the next chapters 4. The story is progressing at the right speed not too fast not too slow i think the author should keep this pace and accelerate or decelerate when need like a fight or a major event really good job there .... Review score 4.5/5 the only other complain i have is the chapters frequency ... can you please release 20 chapter per week XD .Overall the vocabulary needs a little fixing also for those who think artemis name isn't pronounce with artemisa and is artemis well who cares artemis is in english and greek artemisa is in spanish :) hope this solved your hesitation to read the novel...Good reading ...** Author keep up the good work hope you werent offended by the joke above ..!

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ehhh...kenapa MC sangat lemah.. apa gunanya mall sistem jika MC tidak dugunakan.. saya yakin banyak misi yang sudah terselesaikan (seingat saya)

Is there harem cuz i dont liks harem

I'm lazy so I gonna keep it short. I love this novel so I giving it full stars. So..........................................................

This doesnt deserve premium the mc is annoying artemis is annoying and i dropped the story not even 10 chaps in so **** the author for wasting my time

I was only able to read a few chapters before I stopped, the grammar and spelling is extremely bad. There's people in the comments of some chapters that are basically translating the novel into proper English and yet the chapters themselves don't seem like they've been edited at all.

bro, you have a good story. its nice to see a new novelist rise up to shine, i will try to support you by reading and appreciate your works the grammar was horrible at early but its getting better and better later on, it's show how hard you work. we are really thankful for that.

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You have so much potential, but the mistakes you make with grammar, names, and other things are becoming unbearable. Many readers are asking you to hire someone to proofread for you, but you still haven't fixed them.

The novel is a little slow with there release schedule but it is worth the read. No problems with the novel besides how many chapters are release

I personally think that this is a great story, although the author does have many grammatical errors it is improving. However that does not mean that the story is not well portrayed and innovative.

Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little. Plz increase chapter per week. 4/week is too little.