Reviews of THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

This story is really hard to read because of the grammar, but otherwise, it is a great story. If it had better grammar, I would like it a lot more.

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consistent grammar, just not good grammar. plot vs grammar, the plot is not good enough for me to ignore the grammar. MC goes hunting in a forest while trying to catch 'em all. his growth rate is not fast, but not slow as he is in a "party". Author doesnt tell us many things. If you're a reader who wants more detailed information on how things work, this story wont suit you

it is good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am not going to comment about the grammar because most people talked about it. This book has a very interesting premise. The idea of a monster controlling other monsters to battle sounds fun. However, the characters are pretty basic. they exist to rain praises on the MC and generally admire his amazingness. their IQ is what worries me the most, the MC proposes a basic fighting strategy and they praised him to the heavens. If you disregard the above flaws it is an amazing novel. **. I read the first dozen chapters only.

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I am really enjoying the work, the one that most irritates is the author creating work with non-human MC just so that he can become human in the third chapter and never return to a monster again. but the work is very cool with good action and evolution

book would be amazing if the grammer and other mistakes were fixed. due to errors the story is very hard to pay attention to, rather I am counting errors per chapters.

You never truely value grammar until you read this little gem. If you came here looking for Webnovel quality writing, you will surely be disappointed as it's worse than that(or fucking estatic depending on your S&M preferences). *Mandatory note* The idea is fine and even good in some respect just the execution is beyond horrible (like really needs a rewrite horrible). There is no punctuation at all like no commas (is he eating his sisters or are his sister's eating?), wierd capitals, wierd tenses and worst of all no full stops. Why does that matter though? 101 course on why basic structure matters: IT SETS THE FUCKING PACE OF THE WRITING. It feels as though the author looked at how fast light could travel and decided they could do better and boy did they. The only times the sentences stop is when a question is asked, the entire chapter is a single sentence. Characters aren't a thing here only puppets with puppets controlling them, the basic 'MC asks/does something', "WOw THaTs a gReAt IdEAs HE sO SMorT". Characters don't really contribute anything to the story at all, they're mostly there for false gratification, as if the MC did anything substantial or meaningful. Why are names the way they are in this story like image calling your pet 'white doggy'. World building honestly haven't read far enough to actually get points but so far we learned that we should not buy cheap PSU's or else 'boom'. Rest of it seems pretty standard to this genre which isn't a bad thing persay but still unfortunate. Update stability basically the author decided that speed is the play, by going full sicko mode to truely show what quantity over quality feels like. (What's the point if your novel is only a couple of sentences long?) Story: I got stronger... but so have my enemies I got stronger... but so have my enemies I got stronger... but so have my enemies. It's not a novel it's a very sneaky and elaborate ploy to make the readers think they're actually reading something (don't tell them that though).

this book so far is pretty good needs more character development tho but overall pretty cool book i see a lot of bad reviews mostly about grammar to me the grammar is ok because i've read a lot of cultivation books once you read enough of those everything has good grammar

Someone let me know when this author gets an editor or learns to use punctuation. The story sounds interesting, but the lack of punctuation in even the 1st chapter is a turn off.

This is unreadable, your story may be very good, but I can’t force myself to read this. Get an editor or rewrite it yourself. If someone starts this novel he will most likely drop it by the second chapter.

love the characters and the whole idea of this world. its well written and a fun new take on the isekai and system as well as having some lighthearted humour mixed in. updates are really timely and chaptwrs are also a good length

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If you can adjust for the grammatical errors in your head while reading, I would highly recommend this book. Wish you'd release more chapters faster, but it's understandable.

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