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Reviews of THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

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THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

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uncledavie
uncledavieLv12uncledavie

This is hard to read. The story itself has potential, but the grammar, spelling, and overall continuity of the story needs work. Id recommend getting someone to help edit your chapters or spending more time editing them yourself. Editing your work is how you improve as a writer, so i encourage you to do so. Till then sorry but dropped.

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Koroma
KoromaLv4Koroma

This is one of, if not, the worst thing I have ever read. First off, the MCs name. I know it seems like I'm nitpicking, but really? His actual name is Shadowslash? That is literally the first name that pops into my mind when i think ****ty Sonic the Hedgehog OC. Secondly, the total lack of grammatical anything. If you came here expecting a story with basic things such as punctuation, well sorry to say but you're **** outta luck. Misspellings are also very common. Thirdly, the plot. It's a very generic isekai monster reincarnation. On top of being very generic it's also very forced. Things happen because the plot needs to progress, so don't expect fantastical things such as common sense or logic. Finally, the style. It's dead and dry. Things happen so quickly you could blink and miss it (e.g., he went to the forest to hunt and then he came back). The dialogue (and monologue) is emotionless (e.g., "I found this piece of monster meat but I didn't kill it" "Ok"). Also, you should never use abbreviations such as OMG in a novel as it breaks the flow of story and just plainly looks wierd.

Lord_Cthulhu
Lord_CthulhuLv4Lord_Cthulhu

A funny and cool novel, it is very well written and does not have so many grammar mistakes. I love the name of the skeleton, I just hope it has incest. *Wink* *wink* ;)

wonderer_ken
wonderer_kenLv5wonderer_ken

the mere thought of a monster being a monster tamer is a blast for me. 🀯🀯🀯🀯 loving the novel so far😍😍 this novel is one of the disregarded amazing books piece of advice: just try to read this novel and you will not regret it

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

catvi
catviLv5catvi

Impossible to read. This author for some WEIRD INCOMPREHENSIBLE REASON uses no Full stops/periods. The grammar looks good HOWEVER, you don't know where the sentences end. Impossible to tell.

Everything_system8
Everything_system8Lv12Everything_system8

The idea of a monster summoningοΏΌ monsters is very interesting but the grammar in this novel is such a buzz kill,it just feels very badly made.

Wolfistien123
Wolfistien123Lv4Wolfistien123

Horrible grammer. It dosn't use any full stop and very hard to read. I don't know how it got so many good reviews must be author doing something behind the scenes. it's horrible. I recommend not to read it unless author fixes it.

IamGAwesome
IamGAwesomeLv12IamGAwesome

A good novel. Funny and relaxing in such a way that the characters are written in an adorably unique description. I kind of understand the release time since the author is a student so it is a given. Nevertheless, I am still looking forward to read more of this novel. 😍 More power!

Darkly5
Darkly5Lv13Darkly5

Im sorry if I sound like a bad guy but this story needs some serious work on its grammar and also story, like it says it passes a whole week instantly Without giving much clue as too what happened. It instantly transfers to him adventuring without giving much explanation. Basically the story loses its interest very quickly due to how its written and doesnt sound well thought out.

Merulox
MeruloxLv2Merulox

The writting and grammar is shit. It looks like it was written by a 11 year old for an essay. Read the beginning of the first actual chapter and felt like throwing up

SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv13SMomoTempest

Just call it: Demon King/King of MonstersπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜

Isabelle_O
Isabelle_OLv12Isabelle_O

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NecromikReal
NecromikRealLv6NecromikReal

Interesting twist on having the MC as a Monster that can Summon/Tame other monsters....lol very funny some times, it begins a little rough and gets better as it progress. Keep the good work Author San.

UndeadBandit
UndeadBanditLv4UndeadBandit

Reveal spoiler

Randomystic
RandomysticLv4Randomystic

I noticed this has been going on for a while and no reviews but this is gold. Consistent updates and an interesting plot. New characters and dynamics along with world building. If animal reincarnation is your thing this is great.

mujaki2
mujaki2Lv14mujaki2

imagine watching Pokemon, only the Mc trainer is reincarnated as a pokemon monster so he can level up too. Now he fills his pokedex with all kinds of monsters as he expands his family of monsters, learning about each other's backstories and using strategy to help them all level up. Just like the game there's chapters full of grinding with tons of details for each battle. Occasionally the plot is sprinkled in as the world begins spiraling stronger. If you love the chapters filled with stats updates this is for you. In the chapters before 100 there are double chapters marked as .5 that are fully dedicated to showing everyone's current status. I'm afraid I started skipping those and some longer battles too. The concepts for the story are solid and fun.... each and every battle is extremely detailed, and you can easily track the Mc and all his underlings slowly getting more powerful. It is possible too have a bit too much detail.

Saidkasimov
SaidkasimovLv2Saidkasimov

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Daoist351057
Daoist351057Lv2Daoist351057

Really love your story, can't wait for more upcoming chapters.....................................................................................

Manhua_Realm
Manhua_RealmLv3Manhua_Realm

I've read like 100+ chapters, there are romance and harem tags, am i missing something? Cause there is no romance or anything there. Can anyone tell me when does it start?