13 This is "The One"?

I want to know, just how flawed is this story? Tell me. I'm giving you all a reason to criticize heavily! Besides I want to see my flaws, I knew this would be flawed but I want to know just how bad I did it, things that didn't make sense, plot holes, dialogue, anything really. Come on, just tell the 16 year old how his story is either bad or made no sense, I want to see how I could maybe better myself in writing.

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Seeing Tomura tense up at my words and Kurogiri look more wary, or as much as he could when you can't see his face, gave me a nice sense of accomplishment. Don't ask why I don't know either

'Oh original I am no longer like you am I? I've failed to live up to your expectations.. Ah whatever'

"You know master said you were stronger than you let on, I didn't believe that but you've proved me wrong. You got rid of master's biggest threat and he passes his thanks, so why don't you just stop and let master take your quirk." Tomura spoke with a smile on his face, like he ignored both what I had just said and what I had said just a few minutes ago.

"Wow such a great offer, but you see your master has nothing of worth, except his quirk" I kept walking forward as I spoke which cause Kurogiri to step in front as his arms stood by his side

"We thank you for all you have done, however master could use your ability much greater than you ever could. So please, give up without fuss." His words were calm, he knew not to immediately anger me, however he still was trying to anger me, so I did what any rational person would do

Stomping, the ground rose behind the mist man as he quickly opened a portal behind him before another opened right behind me, once it got close it immediately shattered though as I repeated the action multiple times, the ground rose by both of them as the ground under them crumbled, Tomura was dodging as best he could as any that got close he used his quirk on, getting grazed and stabbed by a few since it took too much time to disintegrate the weaponized ground

"Come on! Keep dodging, this is fun!" I laughed as I kept stomping, exploding the ground below them as Kurogiri seemed to be getting tired from using so many portals so quickly, Tomura was panting heavily before getting pierced through the gut by a large spike that rose from the ground. Coughing blood he went to disintegrate the rock before stopping, he couldn't actively choose between the rock and his own body that was stuck to it so if he used his quirk, he'd disintegrate himself as well

"Young master!" Kurogiri used another portal to safely separate Tomura but once he did he quickly realized it was a horrible mistake, to the side Tomura came out, a gaping hole in his chest before he was quickly forced to the ground, impaled by numerous white feathers that then disappeared once he took his last breath

Looking to the sky, Kurogiri was distracted as I shot towards him with my hand outstretched, before I could touch him however a black sludge started to come out of him, before it was immediately spread off as a projectile came from behind him, electricity sparking slightly as I saw a red/orange colored beam pass by, my hand in contact with the neck brace he then growled in pain, electricity surging off him as both my hands came around his neck

"Everyone has bio electricity! An engineered Nomu like yourself is no different!" He groaned before completely stopping, falling now that I stopped holding him up, the mist around his face fading slightly to show a slight bit of blue hair before forming once again, the quirk still "working" in a way only to obscure his face

Turning around, I saw where the feathers and electricity came from, a guy the same age as me, wearing a maroon suit with dirty blonde hair as 6 white wings spread out from his back. To his side a girl that looked just a bit younger than me, brown shirt and shorts with noticeable scars on her, looking back to the guy I saw some scars on him as well

'This world does have espers, thanks for that All Might, you brought them to me'

"So who are you two? Some wannabe heroes?" Smirking, I spoke with a condescending tone which made the blonde smile slightly

"Well you made quite a show for us you know.. Here we were, hiding from the big bastard and another shows up, another esper.. You called yourself Accelerator no? I'm Kakine, this girl is Mikoto, two of the now 5 known espers in Japan" He smirked as he gave his introductions, the girl sighing lightly at his words before she then spoke up

"What he said was right, there were only 4 of us at least here in Japan and we're all one group, and now you show up. And you're stronger than blondy here.. now our ranks change to accommodate you.." Kakine looked visibly annoyed at having been told to be weaker than me, but he also knew that it wasn't wrong, considering he somehow, along with the others, had been hiding from All Might

"Why the hell were you hiding anyway? You're an esper, we're different since we don't have that gene, yet you're telling me that you couldn't take down the brute? Sounds like some crap to me"

"Yes as much as I hate to admit it, we did hide from All Might, bastard almost did irreversible damage from a fucking cheap shot.. The why doesn't matter, he's dead now and we can make ourselves known"

"Yes, yes, we're the pinnacle of power in Japan, no way America or the other countries or states will just stand by, especially not if it's revealed that there are living and multiple espers. The brute knew about you, about us, you think the other powers don't at least know a decent amount? Besides, there's one more person to take care of here.. So come out you fucking coward" At my words Kurogiri's body glowed like his portals before a man in a black suit came out, he was bald, a dark mask on his face, speaking of his face it barely looked like one, no visible mouth or eyes, yet he could clearly "see" probably a bunch of sensing quirks to get the same effect

"Such a shame really, my successor killed and one of the doctor's greatest Nomu's killed, though he can be re used. Accelerator, I gave you a chance and this is how I'm repaid? I think it's only fair I take something myself, your ability should suffice."

"So who's the potato looking guy?" Misaka's words brought a smile to Kakine's face and gave me a mental chuckle before I looked towards "Japan's nightmare"

"That's All For One, maybe you know him as "The One" also the guy used in those children's story to get them to sleep early"

"Really? This is 'The One'? Barely breathing, no face, fucker looks like he's stepping 3 feet in the grave already"

"Yeah well he still is a threat, for normal people at least, no normal person could handle the hundreds or thousands of quirks he has, even made some combinations to make quirks stronger. So before we get rid of the guy, what does the word toaru mean to you two?"

Judging by the very confused looks from the two and a combined "The hell is that?" I got the answer that I needed

The two weren't reincarnators, guess this world just wanted to even out the esper numbers.. Yeah right, they're in a group, the world just put together the strongest teenagers all in one group, espers are stupidly stronger than most people, plus our individual personal realities being our abilities foundation, there's no quirk that can take or stop our abilities

The world just made us the strongest people here for fun. This is fucking great