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Hey everyone I just want everybody to know that there's a lot of mistakes made in the previous chapters which I am going to go through all of them and start editing one by one so forgive me for how bad it is. Please comment on the story so far though. There is going to be a world building chapter coming soon. I will explain the different factions kingdoms races and more. There will be explicit chapters which will be more so a bonus chapter and will not be too prevalent to the actual story but is a part of the story. And you do have the option of skipping those chapters it doesn't take away from the story itself if you do. There's a lot of characters so far and only more characters are yet to come. The next chapter is not going to be a story chapter it's going to be more so a character list. I have realized that I didn't really explain the characters that well but you have a general idea of what they may look like so I'll try to help you visualize what all these characters look like. Now as far as The story goes it's been an idea of had for a long time and I had a different story idea all together but I do have to give it to a fanfic that gave me the idea ultimately to make this story. Zephyr audiobooks fanfic gate war of two worlds. There are others as well but I ultimately was inspired by his fanfic to do this. As far as how I went about it it's not quite exactly what the United States would do if a phenomenon like a portal where to open up to another world. And such a military force to be sent to this particular world wouldn't actually happen exactly. And such a response from the government I doubt would have occurred in this way. But that's the beautiful thing about a story don't take the story so literal I'm trying my best here. But over time the story is going to expand this world's is so much bigger than what we've seen so far and I'm only on the first 14 chapters. I know it seems like I'm rushing through this but it's about to slow down and it's going to be a step by step process transitioning to a bigger conflict later on down the road but that's as far as I'm going to give you. But I will be fixing all the 14 chapters and edit them. Making them easier to read and I'm going to make it better I won't be speeding through the story the first three things chapters I do realize that I gone through it very fast. Anyways I hope you keep reading I hope you bear with me I just want to make an epic adventure story that involves our United States military. I'm an ex-military brat grew up my first 20 years of life being affiliated with our military. And I have nothing but respect for them so if you guys have any ideas to give me please comment or DM me. Again thank you for reading this far if you decided to get this far there will be more ahead but again thank you.