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This novel is SO GOod! Great english and nice grammar! Though I was wondering what the mc's hair color is as it was not described in the first few chapters (maybe I missed it? I'm to lazy to scan the chapters for that) and I can't really use the cover as reference for the mc's appearance, as most of us will get a different picture from what we read (mine was Mirai Kuriyama from an anime called Kyoukai no Kanata, although with longer black hair. I pictured this character as the mc because of her shy and flustered nature, and glasses? I guess). P.S. Imagine the system as a yellow ball that has facial expressions (like an emoji) it made things a lot funnier for me.
Thisbl is the best story Ive read so far about game systems in people's lives! Keep up the good job! I love your novel! I can't believe I didn't find this sooner to be honest. This should be a manga, and anime sinfe it'e really that good! The grammar needs to be fixed a little but it doesn't stop the reader from enjoying the story.
Despite I still new in this story but over all i enjoy it very much. Hope Gio and Sofony can be pair canyon in here. I just not like that Sofony make her weakness so clear for co-host like Clarissa. Call me shameless or what but i enjoy the ML story, i mean not many author can be very creative make this story be very dark plot. Good job author, keep fighting for this story and take care your healthy