LanceVance
Author here This is a shameless review of myself. As some of you may have noticed, I am not a native English speaker. I will do my best to enrich my vocabulary. My story development is going pretty well from what I see, a lot of you seem to enjoy it. The character design could sometimes be better but I will give myself five stars haha. I try to post new chapters everyday, sometimes I will post one, two or maybe three. It will happen that I don't post on some days:( As for the world background, I think that im doing a pretty nice job portraying the warring states period, what do you guys think? Anyways, I hope that you guys stick with me to follow the adventures of Kentaro. Peace:)
one of the best novels, although at the beginning the development of the MC is a bit inconsistent in the future everything fits, you only have to endure 47 chapters of little development of the MC, the only thing I can point out is that the development came very late and surely due to this the novel lost readers.
At first the story does not convince me, but the more it progressed it got better, if you don't like the story at the beginning I recommend you not to leave it since it gets more interesting while you continue reading, congratulations to the author and I hope you do not leave this story . PD: sorry if it is not understood, this was translated by google.[img=update]
Let's Rank this Fanfic writing quality: 2 Stars. story development: 1 Star Character Design: 5 Stars Update Stability: 4 Stars World background: 5 Stars This fanfic contains only Cowardly and weak MCs who don't want to OP from the start with the help of System but don't have the will to be strong (weaktostrong of you don't know what i mean). MCs are only people who dare to bully the weak and are afraid of the strong. For example: MC bravely slaughtered bandits, but when he met a member of the Kaguya clan, the MC ran away. In My Opinion i Rated this Fanfic 3.4 Stars
This is just terrible...addive tho but terrible. The MC just going with the flow and making stupid decisions He seriously needs to get his emotions checked cause he can kill tree random kids and just move on but one kid dies in front of him and it's the end of the world. He is annoyingly attached to even the smallest of relationships and it's annoying
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He is too attached to the smallest and most insignificant relationships but has no problem slaughtering kids, but when one boy dies in front of him its the end of the world. His personality continually changes from brave and confident to cowardly and soft hearted. The plot is bland and the system just gives whatever he needs and he barely needs to work for anything, The Mc overly depends on the system and there is no progression of his personality or mentality.
At the beginning the mc and atory was a bit inconsistent but as the story progresses there is huge improvement in character development, background. All in all a good fanfic , still a lot better than the once we have going now. And the most important thing is Author is consistent with the update that's a big plus.
chaps up to 50 should be edited, most personality makes 0 sense and is kind of annoying, its very inconsistent up until 50 or so, its annoying that mc is a normal guy who has never used a sword before is able to just use one and beat a guy who's been training with swords since he was like 5, especially the "I decapitate ___ in a single strike, his body falls lifelessly on the floor" BS, especially since mc shouldn't know how to even sheath a sword (much harder than expected), I can't stress this enough, he has never used a sword and does all of this stuff flawlessly, its supposed to be a realistic ish sword fighting webnovel with some chakra in there. if its the main thing of the novel do it right
not interesting at all , not attachment to mc as a reader , nothing like a ninja , few chapters after mc fought madara uchiha , but find himself in trouble every time . . . world becoming unknown somehow , unknown clan , unknown people. not interesting at all . . no character attention expect MC . MC has no character to himself , no goals . no directions. meaningless or none POV . no awesome moments.