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A good story. However, there are lots of spelling mistakes that really take away from the plot. The development was very well done as were the characters. The world background is extremely and is missing some parts like how Alex got to that planet anyway since it seems like he has memories of Earth. Hope the author will improve the mistakes and I look forward to seeing more in the future.
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GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES GOOD BUT NEEDS MORE UPDATES
I liked the story and the world built by the author. The development of the story so far has been immersive enough to keep me interested. The construction of the protagonist has been true to the author's initial idea. My only negative criticism is the frequency of chapters released. Do not abandon the story, it is incredible, author.