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Wow what a superb story err author u r too much . I loved every bit of this story. I would love that you update from time to time in order to get votes and other stuffs.hope to read other novels from you❤️❤️

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The book has great potential and I feel like there's passion that the writer put in both characters in the story, I love McKenna and Jason maybe stuck up in chapter one, but he definitely gives a chance at something more than just words and general actions like he did with chapter one so I will be sticking around until the end.


I liked the protagonist because she seems to be a down-to-heart person, which is not so common in novels. She's loveable in the little things. Unfortunately she's chosen as a toy for a playboy, but I hope he matures once he sees what wonderful woman she is. Promise us, author, he'll not mistreat her too much! I found the pace of this story good and I liked how the events developed in a non forceful way. Although I had problems understanding where the novel is set, it's just me not being well travelled enough LOL. I usually don't like tags announcing the change of POV, when there's such a thing, but it's a peeve of mine. The author writes in a sensible manner, not delivering too much and spoiling the surprises! Good job, good luck!


Awesome story! I can't wait to finish reading and see if the lead couple ends up together. Good writing quality the story is fast passed. This book has very good potential!


This is one of the best romance novel out there if you are into that kind of thing ............................... ................................ Jason and mckenna's personality are fresh and not shallow........... It is going to be a good book after the author works out the kinks.....I have added it to my library. Great book!!!!


alright so this is a love story which is not something I read a lot as I more into action, but the story was I interesting in it own way. so keep on wokring on it one day I think it will become a great book.


A love story between a secretry and boss. AWesome A story set in Nigeria. Interesting!  A rich guy poor woman trope. Great!  This book has all the thingis I want and it's great. The writing quality is excellent. I grabbed some popcorn and read it. It's like watching a drama. Great work!!! Looking forward for more chapters!


I love the way we see the story through different ML.********************** Jason and McKenna are good for each other just like light and darkness************************************************ truth be told, i am liking this Naya girl and even though i am rooting for Mckenna, i want her to be with Jason as well keep updating!!! it a good read


I have just started reading It and i find it to be highly captivating. The writer has a unique writing style that makes this book so good. Keep up the good work and keep updating.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍


Funny, lighthearted, and enjoyable. Man this book hits different, but to be honest it has a lot of things it has to improve on like its grammar and the way it presents itself. The narration itself and the way the narrative is presented was good with the switching perspectives, but I don't think replaying the same scene serves the purpose that well... not like I could say much about that in my book, but all in all this has been a pretty stellar experience


I enjoyed reading this story. It has a good plot line and some very likable characters. I look forward to more chapters from you. Best of luck with the novel, author.


I must say that this is a very awesome piece of art , it is very captivating and apt at the same time, the writer did a wonderful work in writing, I can boldly give it a five star ratings.



A very good story with an interesting plot. The writing formatting and grammar could use some minor improvements. The characters are great and the humor is solid. Dialogue is great. I like the African side of this story, it really makes it stand out. Love scenes are well described and you keep it interesting throughout. Also feel free to check out my fanon spin-off story Avatar: Macai's Journey if you like Action/Adventure stuff (with some romance).


The language is great. the dialogues flow well. Only, the story is stereo typical, but with a small twists. If you like this genre, it is going to be a great story! If you don't like the genre, then ... you probably will not even be here. If there's one thing this story is, it's expressive! Good job author. keep it up.


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I just started reading this series and so far it has been good.........full of suspense and intrigue.......... I can't wait to read the whole book and I recommend to everyone that loves a good book Please more chapters please.......


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Two different people meet in a pretty typical encounter. At a first glimpse, it appears a nice light read. But if you watch closely, there is a magical power that the author provides us with: the ability to watch the same scene from different perspectives. It is easy to categorize a person by looks or deeds without knowing its true intent and thoughts. I will be eagerly waiting for new chapters. Good job, author!


REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉