The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

It's good story with good MC. I hope that the author doesn't change the plot way too much. Also I hope that he doesn't ruin plot with forced romance. Also Agnes is in harem right? Right?

Honestly, it’s great. Characters feel real or at least very similar to their originals. MCs nicely portrayed. He’s OP, and that just means the characters become the main focus; all of whom are, as stated above, done very well. There are times where things are a bit unpleasant as it does tend to follow the original plotline. Normally, its a big turn off for plots to be just recycled, but the author gives a reason for that which just fits for this world, so I can’t be overly mad. Besides, there are original moments that are *chef kiss*. I won’t elaborate. I really can’t say any more. It’s just a nicely written novel.

It’s AWESOME Please don’t drop! Also please try to deviate a bit from the og so it feels a bit more diff And thank you author Please don’t drop Good luck and FIGHTING!

It's great now I'm gonna fill the word requirement.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I like the premise of the story, and although it may seem weird or similar the author seems to know what they are doing, and all I got to say is keep up the good work!

Great fanfic, would just like to add can you please stop interrupting him mid 5hought whenever he is thinking about how to improve his abilities etc. Its happened more than 10 times in the first 20 chapters and is honestly my biggest gripe about this story. Just how can't he ever finish his self monologues, literally it just keeps happening!

................................................................................... ................................................................