Winter_Night09
Writing Quality- Nothing is wrong with the authors grammar or spelling its just how the converstations are coming along that sort of irk me. My suggestion is to look at how other stories format their dialogue cuz that can be a deal breaker, but overall good writing quality. Stability of Updates- WIth the few chapters released at the moment i would say the author is dedicated to their story and enjoys writing so the updates are good. Story Development- Its progressing at a level where im happy but could be slowed down if the author wants to. Character Design- Id say the author already got their characters all planned out, so i have nothing really to complain abt in this department. World Background- Though the chapters are few the author can sort of introduce to the worlds lore slowly in snippets so that the readers can piece it together as the story goes on and not an info dump which can be forgotten really easilly. Overall-7/10 u made a fan of ur novel and im continue reading it so I can see how ur journey of being an author comes along.
First English is not my first language so I'm sorry if I can't check your grammar HAHAHA. And I must say I love the way you deliver your characters and the way you describe the settings is very clear and wonderful. Keep up the good work. If you all got time please do check out this awesome fantasy book with your friends and best friends or just you all won't regret it.