Authors note

Hi my name is Kadie Adams, this story will be my first ever story posted and so I figured id give you a little bit of back story on me. I'm 16 years old and dreaming of writing as a side hobby, I want to get better at writing and would love constructive criticism. I hate negative comments and people telling me how I should think (in a rude minor like I said constructive criticism is very much welcome) thank you to those who will take time and read my book.

Also, I was thinking for any non-English readers maybe I could translate my book???? But it will be a maybe because I don't know If google is accurate if not and yall like my book enough ill find a translator :)))