The Rise of the Black Plain

Overall a good novel. As the author promises it avoids most of the cliches/pitfalls of other webnovels. The plot, execution etc are very good. But OMG how verbose it is. Every chapter filled with descriptions after descriptions of the smallest things. The most annoying thing is that they start anywhere, middle of dialogue, scene description, etc so by the time the long meandering descriptions of somethings have ended (which towards the end may not even have any relation with the original context) you would lose track of the original context itself. If author can improve on this aspect and generally the writing quality, then this can be a great book.

I would first like to say thank you for your hard work in making this novel and the world you have built in it. Love your novel. keep up the good work!

Author says MC's main goal is freedom, yet is currently making him a slave to his mothers sect. Everything he says gets ignored and he is being forced into a position he doesn't want by people he doesn't like. All the while the mother and her family act like he doesn't hate them. This has gotten so much worse.

very different. A lot of city management and characters actually act like functional humans that have their own motivation, ambition and desires

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I love this type of slow paced, well thought out kingdom building ! And I hope this story will continue to be updated.

it annoys me to read a novel in a 3rd person POV

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1st I want to tell the author that hats off you have done amazing work. This will always be on my recommended list of WN. Story concept great, Worldbuilding element all-time favourite of readers, execution fantastic. Character development is ok cuz of 6 years time skip that's ok it is understandable. the romance part is great and the storytelling is good. The most off-putting thing about this novel is the recurring 18+ scenes. yes, it is good to be open minded but it was repetitive. Just pointing out that this deed is happening is ok there is no need to explain every time everything with the same partner. Another thing is the fighting scenes, not so gripping and a bit confusing. Overall a great read. I appreciate your efforts in this novel and I enjoyed the journey till now, hoping for a long journey with every updates.

The way in wich he gets the inheritance is kinda random and forced but besides that everything else is pretty good, there's enough action, cultivation progress, the city management hasn't taken too much or gone into the nitty gritty, the MC has been rational and plans well as far as I've read (ch 70ish), he could have stayed inside the spatial kingdom when he got it, forget about the black plains territory and come out when he's lvl 60-70+ but the story wouldn't be nearly as entertaining

A light novel where i don't have to encounter same lines every few chapters or half the chapter only contains line full of praises for the mc like in Chinese mass production novels...

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Excellent storyline!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

It was very fun I'm at chapter 100 now I actually laughed at loud at the title being misread by me as rise of the back pain so I got curious and started to read a fork

Love it. Such a gem I found. Just read it if your considering whether to read or not. Trust me, you won’t be disappointed. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍

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the story is good but the progress in cultivation is like turtle, even when the MC come to another world and """MORE BETTER""" than their word it's progress of add level is the same as their word and 99% is book? 1% is novel? i don't know if the MC have a curse because it's friend?, sex-friends? and wife dead in battle ...

1400...too many of his people are dying...whats even the point in him becoming powerful when he cant protect anyone at all? This novel is becoming a disappointmen

It a really story and follows a not so simple plot. I’m currently at chapter hundred and my only problem with the story rn is the combat. So far the combat takes is purely based on level and technique grade which all the combat bland and unexciting.