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The Rich Daughter Is A Mob Character, But She's Not Keeping In Line

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huahua
huahuaLv14huahua

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TackcaT
TackcaTLv13TackcaT

very few spots where he/she were wrong so that's a plus. my only negative comment is that there are only 21 chapters!!! please please please get this book released!!!

thakarriddhi11
thakarriddhi11Lv13thakarriddhi11

Can't wait to read more. hope it gets picked [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

trick_or_treat
trick_or_treatLv6trick_or_treat

Raw? Any spoilers? Is this worth reading? …….. So she "sold" herself in a way to save her adopted mom‘s life… and the fake daughter, the adopted mom‘s blood related daughter I assume, did nothing? 🤔 Spoiled to the core huh 🙄 And her thinking that the mc took everything (the ml) from her tsk tsk tsk aren’t you talking abt yourself 🙄🙄🙄 No idea if I want to read it *sigh* Maybe there are funny scenes that may move me, funny grandparents are the best lol

Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15Immortal_Goddess

Review until Chapter 40: Translation quality needs TONS of improvement. This book loses track of gender pronouns and even the characters’ names. Latest one would be Grandma Chen. She was mentioned then poof she turned into Mother Chen. Also, Mother Chen (Yilan) likes her daughter-in-law Qingqing a lot and yet asked her to call her (Yilan) AUNT. Should it not be MOTHER? FL Qingqing is not a complete pushover or weak. She just have a big weakness, her adoptive mother. ML is good. He was not portrayed like “Voilà, I’m hale and hearty now that I can run a marathon.” His recuperation is slow. There should be therapists to teach his wife and guide him back to mobility. 3 years of being a vegetable… and no mention of nutrient infusions. There are a lot of inconsistencies that need to be edited or corrected. But it is still a good read so far, just not a must read for me.

X_X_I
X_X_ILv4X_X_I

This is based on 40 chapters. Let me first say that I saw the word mob in the title & got excited thinking we were getting a mob story. (I mean I guess we could later on but it doesn't seem so.) As the synopsis says, FL is treated like trash by her family & is basically forced to take the place of her adopted sister to marry a comatose ML. ML wakes up & now her family wants the adopted sister to replace her in marriage. They continue to treat her like trash & ML does help her, though he's not clear with his intentions towards her so she assumes he just wants her as a caretaker. This isn't the worst story but it's kind of weak compared to other similar stories. So, while I guess it's an okay read it's not a story you'd miss out on f you didn't read it.

Jean_Fere
Jean_FereLv4Jean_Fere

This was just rather bad. The villains were evil without any point and stupidly self destructive as well. The protagonists were dull, empty, and in general lacking awareness of any sort. Can't call the unfolding of the story a plot, just a lifting of incidents that are pretty much clichés. What irks most is that this one got picked up when so many better ones did not

Tena_Smith
Tena_SmithLv15Tena_Smith

The writing quality was a little bad at first, it look like the author was getting the characters mixed up. The story development and character design was impressive. I loved it! An all around good storyline.

zaidhy
zaidhyLv14zaidhy

nicely written but a bit hurried. love the plots twists and turns. excillaratunglt refreshing story line. 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍 😋 😌 ✨ ☺ 👌 😍

Lady_Comet
Lady_CometLv15Lady_Comet

Translation and/or editing issues a plenty. Story wise it's an easy read if you can ignore the translation issues. The characters are a little flat but it's good for a one day read.

Moonmeetsthestars
MoonmeetsthestarsLv15Moonmeetsthestars

Was great would recommend to anyone who likes doting husbands

knittinggal
knittinggalLv15knittinggal

The book is not bad or too infuriatinv to read. There are, however, several parts where what is written id clearly impossible. All characters don't make much sense- even those which are not intentionally made stupid have brains that are rather illogical, laggy or offline. Lots of delusionsl folks there as well. I was happy to find a completed work with less than 200 chapters, but due to the characters brains I can't enjoy the read- it makes my brain somewhat tired and laggy

Bambam_99
Bambam_99Lv15Bambam_99

I read for free and it was still a waste of time - FL is dumb, overconfident in her safety, and very weak willed. Both parents make no logical sense in their desire to hide serious crimes and somehow still blame the victim (the FL). ML - only likes that she is timid and shy so he suddenly falls in love with a woman after hating women his whole life….

icingquinyang2
icingquinyang2Lv15icingquinyang2

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Esha20
Esha20Lv11Esha20

i am looking for a novel in which FL is spoiled by her grandpa and she marries a disabled young master who was present in the party hosted by fl for some reason. and she instantly packed her luggage and went with ml. to face a bad old servent when asked to prepare food. maybe she was reborn not sure. the young master on wheelchair was degraded by his own family and servants. this story is only first 5 chapters, i dont remember the name of novel. if anyone knows let me know

kenshin_x
kenshin_xLv7kenshin_x

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moonlite_anne03
moonlite_anne03Lv14moonlite_anne03

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Ciarra34
Ciarra34Lv3Ciarra34

I'm looking forward to this story. can't wait to read it.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Vividly_Dawn
Vividly_DawnLv13Vividly_Dawn

well, I'm happy with the fast development of the main leads characters. I like the way her mother in law treating the FL. And also hope that the story will get picked

b2uty_cha
b2uty_chaLv10b2uty_cha

i so loveee this story! the interaction between the FL and the ML is so cute! Hopefully it gets picked! Want to read more of it. anyone knows the raw?