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The Prisoner System

Andrew Reiss is a 21 year old high school drop out slaving his life away at a McDowells fast food place. On a boring day like every other he was taking a shower getting ready for a date with his loving girlfriend. His excitement made him get careless and As he gets out of the shower he slips on a shampoo bottle and cracks his head against his toilet. That’s not what killed him though, his head had fallen into the toilet bowl and since he was unconscious he drowned in piss. His head hurts like absolute hell and when he opens his eyes he looks up to see a foot stomping down on his face. Andrew has unfortunately been reincarnated into the body of a galactic criminal several centuries into the future. How will he survive this terrible injustice... simple, break out. And use his new system to gain power and not be a total loser this time around.... he’s still sad about missing his date though. “Hopefully she doesn’t get over me that quickly... at least a month” he mumbles to himself in the prison infirmary.

Loligagger27 · Sci-fi
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8 Chs

Broken

I wake up in the infirmary again.

And the same nurse from last time checks up on me.

Is she the only one on staff?

" looks like your awake"

" you'll be escorted to your cell within the hour"

" how long was I out?"

" don't know, don't care"

She turned around to leave but quickly gave me a downwards elbow strike to my stomach.

Yeah.... wonder what I did.. until I find out I won't get mad at her. If she's treating me this badly it must be justified.

After about 20 minutes two guards accompanied by the same woman as last time arrive to take me back to my cell.

"Hello again Mr. Reiss"

" hello"

" before we take you back to your cell I have a few questions for you"

" go on"

" is everything upstairs in order? "

" JUST PEACHY, MISS GRENE "

There it is again.... yeah. I still might end up in the backseat if this continues.

" well at least you're still yourself"

" Yeah well I still don't know what I'm in here for"

" well that's really too bad isn't it~~<3"

" what?!"

" at first you might have been lying. Now, your brain damage can be enough evidence to make people think you're telling the truth... but I honestly would prefer it if you did really forget."

She said that as she leaned back on a chair, legs crossed, and an index finger by the right corner of her mouth.

"Crazy B*tch"

" thanks for the complement"

After a few minutes of walking I make it back to my cell and get sucker punched as soon as the door shuts.

" where have you been"

" I was in th..."

((Huchough))

She kicked me while I was on the floor.

" I don't really care"

" why'd you kick me"

" because I felt like it"

" your really mean"

" I'm a murderer.. you should be happy your not getting hurt worse"

" HOW MANY WOULD THAT BE ELIZABETH?"

" ho...."

" TAKE THE NUMBER OF LIVES ON YOUR HANDS, THE GALLONS OF BLOOD YOU HAVE SPILLED, THEN MULTIPLY IT BY A NUMBER SO BIG IT DOESNT FIT IN YOUR HEAD.

THEN... AND ONLY THEN WILL YOU GET EVEN AN INFINITESIMAL OF THE WAY TO WHAT IM IN FOR"

She steps back a bit.

"Yeah.. we.. well how would someone like you end up in such a rinky dinky ass prison like this if what your saying is even close to true"

She proceeds to rush back to her bed and turn her back to me.

Elizabeth huh...

How the hell does this guy know that.

Well whatever.. his little outburst has put me in a weird position. Now I'll have to ride this wave he made as far as possible. I'm obviously all talk. Once she realizes that I'm dead.

" H.. how did you know my name was Elizabeth?"

" I know everything about everything Liz"

" you're lying"

" wish I was... can't forget shit. All I've done, seen, heard.... it's all on replay. Constantly ... I flash through my life in the blink of an eye"

" I might not be capable of much with such a useless body... but even here... does intelligence hold such a high position of power."

" get on my bad side...."

" you'll wish... beg me for death. And it shall elude you forever more"

" I'll make sure you never break so our fun never ends~~<3"

She gets under the covers.

Oh thank god it worked.

That was all me by the way. I was in drama club back in high school. Before I can get my thoughts together because of how fast my hearts beating....

{{ WE NEED TO HAVE A TALK MR.REISS }}

I ,agree.... I want to know what's going on.

{{ YOU WILL, OF COURSE, YOUR CONTINUED EXISTENCE DEPENDS ENTIRELY ON HOW MUCH WE AGREE ON }}

And just how much will that be?!?!?

{{ LETS FIND OUT TOGETHER }}

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