blowfish1407
Overall, the storyline is very interesting. There are some missing capital letters and punctuation but hey, everyone made mistakes. Author just need to go through some earlier chapters and make edits. No big deal. The later chapters are definitely much better. So this is worth reading. The characters are described really well. The whole pace is fine too as it kept the readers entertained the whole time. Overall it is an enjoyable read. For fans of fantasy, this is recommended. Thank you for sharing this story with me.
A compelling plotline and an original fantasy. A few spelling errors are here and there. The author needs to work with punctuation also. Overall regardless these things the world background can take the reader into a whole new world. A sweet and sizzling story awaits further as I can predictably say. ❤ Keep it up.
A review in the making begins... Here we go! So to start off, it does seem interesting. I think you're doing a good job on the updates but there's some bad grammar, you did say english isn't your first language and thats fine. The world seems interesting i'll give you that much, and there is definately potential to the story. Also I found it funny that the Princess was referred to as a Bro con AND a father con! Good luck with your book! And to new readers looking through the reviews... GO READ THE DAMN NOVEL! >:(
*Notice before reading : I've only read 03 chapters. ■ The pros : - The chapters are longer than 1k words and consistents( you can tell that something happens in each and every chapter). - The story is full of mystery. - The fl isn't a noble lady but a maid. - The pace is just right( at least for me). - There are 100 FREE chapters ! The cons : - I don't like the Fl. The fl doesn’t have any flaw . Her only flaw is literally that she's too kind. And the author also keeps TELLING us that. - The author's writing is a bit flawed. The author is mostly telling us things instead of showing us . e.g : He/she tells us in the 3rd chapter that Mc is " Kind , likes to read books ( by the way , how come the langage in that new world she's in is exactly the same as the one in her former world?) , has good painting skills..." . It also feels like he/she is forcing us to see the Mc as perfect and equal to the other noble ladies , in spite of her status ( she's a maid). - The writer makes some grammar mistakes( but it doesn’t hinder the reading experience very much). All in all , this book is intriguing. Unfortunately , somethings in its early chapters ( mostly the Fl) just turn me off. Still , since there are so many good reviews , i'll give it a chance and wait to see how it will evolve. Ps : Don't take too much to heart what i said author. I might change that review if the book lives up to my expectations. 😋
I mean why's this so underrated!! this novel has such a great storyline and development I mean it's literally on another level!! this novel seriously needs exposure Every little thing about this is perfect can't explain from words for me it was like a rollercoaster ride waoh I love it and will read till the end
First when I came across this novel name when searching for new novel...I thought it would be a duke type/typical cultivation/historical kind off story..when I started i couldn't stop reading it...it's addictive & amazing novel... author sticks to his/her story line not deviating from it(in many contemporary/historical novels have similarities/imitation kinda chapters) & updates chapters timely..& each character characterization I spot on not changed at all..kudos 👏to ur amazing thought process for creating such a story...u made it look like it really happened 🧡...if i keep on talking/writing about chapters/characters it will become a mini essay (I think it already became one😉)..if have to write a drawback on it..it'll only be misplaced he /she terms making as to stop & think who author is referring too...but rest all very minor grammatical mistakes are invisible...keep on writing author...u r amazing...Hope u update when u start other novel..we will surely follow u through it🤗
I rarely write a review but I can’t stop 😫 myself from writing one for this book. It’s really hard to find FL who have gone through a lot of hardship, pain and difficulty not to turn cold and, indifferent. Also wanting a chance to become stronger and prove their worth is mostly common. It’s not bad though but being a cheerful person😇, I can’t stop wanting to find a cheerful and mischievous Fl 😉😉 too. Despite having the fate of the whole kingdom, 😒 scratch that the fate of the whole world on her shoulders, watching her people, comrade and father die before her, finding out her mom died young because she sacrificed her life force for her, our Fl still have the brightest smile that could make the dark cloud above your head disappear 😉, have a care free attitude 😊 and save a lot of people without any hindrance cause of her past. So optimistic, brave and strong but she would rather protect the world than rule it. Though there are some grammatical errors in some chapters which might be edited later, but the story plot will definitely have you hooked and also, there’s no dull moment with our Lory😎. She really is a trouble magnet 😏.
I love the book but When are you going to Continue the book Its a Really nice story and i will love if you continue with it ? If anyone Reads This you will not feel disappointed it is absolutely hilarious 😂😂😂 and the FL is not like the other FL you read from other stories . its different from the others FL stories and i really enjoy this book Because that 😉 Thank you for the great story keep it up . 👍 please continue the book thank you 😊
Love that this story has trodden on the path not taken often... Most, if not all books are limited to satisfy readers romantic fantasy; which is not wrong at all (guilty myself😋). In here, someone has taken the effort and courage to gently bend readers mind to things more beautiful like brevity⚔, kindness🕊 and selflessness💓 along the lines of a love story. These which are often not considered important in our stories and real lives as well. You're advocating for a beautiful world in your own way. Its is refreshing and warms my heart so much to see this.
Amazign story of Lory and Zhao li xin. He has never been loved by anyone, hated and feared by everyone. Treated cruelly by all and vice versa. But lory comes and everything changes, she understands and see him for himself. Not for his power, not strength or looks. A love story of full acceptance and genuine sincerity fr each other