I love this to the core! This novel has made me giggle, sad, shocked. I never knew I could have these emotioons by reeading a novel. Its not your typical love drama with crybaby FL and non-sensical misunderstanding. If you like a strong female protagonist you're gonna love this oone. Author has done a good job to her character.
I really enjoy reading your book, dear author. It had me laugh quite a few times. some people might feel sad at some parts, but I only shed tears when animals suffer 🙃 Even if the grammar is sometimes wrong, it is still easy to understand because its minor mistakes or some missing words. Keep up the good work! 🥰
Whenever I feel that one chapter a day is too less for me, I start to read from the beginning once again. And no matter how many times i have read it, it doesnt get bored of it. Revisiting the initial moments of chemistry, adventure, friendship, love, genuine care. Never gets old. And that is why this book is a timeless classic for me.
Lory is affecting me too in ways I didn't realise 😂 Many if not all stories have unrealistic standards to their characters. Which we all can relate that this doesn't happen in the real world. Also, we enjoy to fantasize these perfect life characters. Only this story is unrealistic in all the right departments. There are should be more stories like this. It relays the message to be kind, be loving, be caring, be brave, be selfless.
This is not just a story but an incredible adventure the author puts the reader on along with the FL. I have read many novels here and so far this one is my favorite, from the writing style to the plot, descriptions of places and people and character introductions. I appreciate the details and the way tye author explains certain elements. I cant wait to continue the journey! Keep up the great work author!
Lory, yang yxin, and ming yue yin. Are friendship goals. Ppl from different statuses and different walks of life. Put down all insignificant details in a world where evil and power reign. These girls individually have empowered each other to be strong independent woman. If i just give an Oscar for this book.
Disclaimer: I’ve only read the first chapter so I gave 3 stars to everything besides writing quality. Regardless of the grammatical errors, the pacing is very odd. There’s a superfluous use of adjectives and many of the sentences are, in a sense, robotic. A lot of points are unnecessarily repeated. I read through it 3x because I would never want to leave a rash review and I did notice many people lauding the unIqueness of the plot. so maybe there’s that? All in all, I found it difficult to read. P.S. If the person who did the coding for this text space ever reads this, please fix the auto-capitalizing upon backspace while within a word.
Wow guy! What you put “literary crack” in these chapters?! I’m starting to be scared of you! This story is so well written, and maintained. One of the best action/love/romance/mystery novels period! Easily this could be a movie. What you see in your minds eye is a movie. Only a few on this site at the same level as the novel. AND for some reason it’s .......! Don’t know why but it is, don’t know how long it will be that way so I’d start reading if I was you(secret sort of)😏. Author thank you! Your dedication to this story, to the characters, to us the readers we appreciate it. Hope you get what you should from all you hard work!
Overall, the storyline is very interesting. There are some missing capital letters and punctuation but hey, everyone made mistakes. Author just need to go through some earlier chapters and make edits. No big deal. The later chapters are definitely much better. So this is worth reading. The characters are described really well. The whole pace is fine too as it kept the readers entertained the whole time. Overall it is an enjoyable read. For fans of fantasy, this is recommended. Thank you for sharing this story with me.