Rollingpandaa
Overall it is a good story but one chapter honestly has me torn. I really want him to get Aunt Meg as a harem member at least but at the same time, I see the value of having Jack around and know his death would hurt Alex. Who knows maybe Jack can die and it can add to Alex's growth. Also in regard to the recent chapters, Alex really has to do something with the loot from the former lords and nobles of the Island. He should really be handing out some lower-ranked martial arts from the noble family to at least the Raging Sun Group. He should also give some of the lower-ranked Cultivation techniques to the Raging Sun Group(Maybe the one belonging to the Jordan family who harrassed the Pearl Villagers). The puppets are fine as they are now, but if the puppets can't learn Martial Arts they will be useless in higher-level battles where everyone has at least one.
At first i really don't expecting too much of this novel. This novel really had surprise me. The beginning was a little to fast, it the middle and late stage the novel was steady and extraordinary really well developed by the author. Congratulations, do you have grow with your own work. **: My english is poor so i'm sorry for don't want to use de google translate. :D
Don’t be fooled by the title: complainers made the author change the direction of the story but they never updated the title...excellent story though; a nice combo of kingdom building and action with a realistic dose of the “pleasure” mentioned in the title. You can expect an excellent storyline with some nice kingdom building mixed with realistic everyday interactions. Could use a little work on the battle scenes though, but that’s not the main focus of the story.
I think story is good especially development of character is not too fast nor too slow only thing I don't like is character overusing puppets and buying a puppet being too cheap. Though it can be upgraded for money 100 for each level price should increase. A better system would have been with some powerfull restrictions like only being able to create 10 puppets at first then when break through to dantain relm then have restrictions of 10 puppets at dantain relm and 100 at lower level and constant upgrade like that. I loved this novel that's why I want it to improve Thank you