1 Rewrite

I have re read the chapters I have posted and I am not happy with them, some things don't make sense, the sentences don't flow well and so on, so ima take some time to study other fanfics and writing styles, I might even switch pov's.

When I post the revamped first chapter tomorrow I want the user Max_Dissapointment to consider it a masterpiece since he was the one who spotted all the mistakes and thought it was horrible, and I kinda agree with him.

I will also delete this when the better chapter comes out(well hopefully its better)

Cartoonist Out, peace.