LittleMsNightmare
OK, so I'm just going to be brutally honest here. Why are there so little reviews for such a short but beautiful story? This story is just good. Writing was perfect, tenses in their rightful places, hardly any dull moment .I literally started and finished this at a go. I fell in love with the characters and I just loved the fact that there went major misunderstanding, no dragging and just straight to the point. This is a gem and I'm sure I'm going to reread it again. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful and simple to love story.
Okay, wait, why is this story so good? I'm not saying its the best thing on the market right now and could totally use a little bit more description, but there's a good amount of suspense for what seems like such a vanilla story. And it's kinda got this theme going on that people never really know anyone because there always seems to be bigger things going on around him that the main character, Dante, doesn't really seem to acknowledge or just moves past. Also, kinda excited to see what the whole deal with Naya is. Keep it up author!
There's something different and unique about this story, especially with the way the author gave life to the flow and the characters themselves. A bit fast paced but not lacking in detail - it's quite an enjoyable read actually. I like the interactions between the characters too. I was surprised with how short it is, but anyhow, I'm going to read more 😁😊 Great work author!
Writing words to my reviews are not my kind of thing usually I just wrote emojis to show my love for one book, But I can't do that to this book, I have to give my opinion, the author is right, there's a lot of twists and turns, chapter 1 already has it, I love all the characters specially Dante hihi, hope that this'll be successful it's worth the read readers give it a try, ^^
the story is quite face pace but it's because it's a short read, the lead date is an interesting guy while our female lead has a steady character. so far I like the read the explanation of the character's introduced, past. on a side note I have to give a big thumbs up for writing about such a rare thing unlike others on this site before. thanks author for a good read.
Nice storyline. grammar - check. no grammatical mistakes. And yeah the character development is good. but I suggest the author change the chapter title to something relevant to the chapter content instead of Ch-1, 2 But still, I wonder y the book is so short. I wish it to be elongated. Nice book with less chaps. I recommend ppl to read this book. You won't regret reading this.
This story had such a beautiful backstory, plot, character design, and overall it was a very good story. I love how it was a short story, that was a bit of a fast paced love story. It was a sweet love story and there was a lot of different little stories. I really, really liked it and would definitely recommend it to others.
I must say I did not expect to read further than I should... One of the things that I find difficult to write because I tend to run out of ideas when it comes to a contemporary genre but the Author-nim seems to have the knack and talent to extend the plot and offer us a great reading material. I am truly impressed of the story especially how the emotions and scenes were woven carefully to actualize such impression for the readers. I am hands down to how the story is well-written. Let us give this novel a chance because it deserves more than one glance or second look, the time you will spend for this story is worth it. This will not disappoint you guys! Please let us give the Author our support and our time to read the novel. Must-Read! 10/10
Just gonna drop a quick review upon reading the first chapter. The story that the characters will live in and plotline has its simplicity. I mean, these kind of stories are a must-read because you will feel the pain and the love that everyone not know about! We should all check this completed story ahead.