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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

New Age is coming

"Come in brother welcome to my humble office" commander Luke laughed loudly.

"Brother in law sorry for this sudden meeting" Sahad

"So what is that you want to talk about?" commander Luke said curiously.

"Its very serious and urgent we have a planetary emergency" Sahad said with serious implication.

With a frown and tightened eye brows he asked "What is going on? what is all this about?"

"Today I meet some visitors and very powerful visitors and they want to meet the Emperor" Sahad

"you said they want to meet the emperor and they are not from our planet that is foreigners, aliens?" commander Luke asked questioning.

"yes, they want to meet the emperor they are very powerful they said they are space patrollers of this universe and they have something very serious to talk to our emperor" said Sahad while pondering.

He continued "they also said If can't manage to fix his meeting with the emperor they will arrive at Imperial palace in two days".

while thinking deeply commander Luke said "I don't what's all this about but I will try to make this information reach the emperor soon, don't worry"

"While I talk all this about to Fire war god you don't talk all this to anyone else!, otherwise it may cause chaos everywhere" commander Luke said seriously.

"okay brother in law I take my leave, take care tell sister I will meet her next week" while giving farewell Sahad went ways.

In in his seat commander Luke shouted "Soldier Mohan quickly sent Fire war lord my greeting's and arrange a meeting soon!"

Soldier Mohan quickly replied "yes sir!"

He went away in war horse and soon arrived at a big palace written "Fire phoenix palace" he saw a guard and told gave him commander Luke message and said "it's urgent please asks to sent this to war god quickly"

In palace Fire war god was sitting in big throne discussing issues about his territory. One servant arrived and gave him a letter when he read his face changed again and again he quickly asked to sent a letter for a meeting.

After a while commander Luke arrived as if he was waiting for the call.

"Long live war god" commander Luke chanted while bowing down.

"Stand up and don't waste anymore time is this all true? I once heard from the emperor about this space patrollers" Fire war god asked while awaiting commander's answer.

"yes my lord today my be brother in law who is soldier reported me he said the visitors wanted to meet this planet authority, the emperor within two days" commander while nodding his head.

"Quickly sent a messenger inform the emperor about all this don't delay a moment I heard they are very powerful, more powerful than saint kings" Fire war god said impatiently.

"will do my lord" commander quickly sent a messenger to the emperor.

In long distance at Unparallel city in Imperial city the messenger arrived he was quickly invited to go inside meeting room. He was soon ordered to enter in a room which was filled with majestic and heavenly aura.

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