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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

Is this Fate?

She quickly appeared before Thunder Fire Dragon War Palace, she spreads her divine sense all around the city she suddenly sensed aura attracting her. She looked towards a particular room where two shadows were visible. She soon dismissed all thoughts and remembered her grandfather instructions and arrived near a cave.

She suddenly felt something was wrong she looked back and saw two person were staring at her without her knowledge. She is a powerhouse of saint ancestor how can someone sense her and she couldn't sense. She quickly backed off three step and said "who are you?"

These two were none other than Nasir and Jasmine. Jasmine opened her mouth and said "I am Jasmine and this is my home and you're the intruder, so tell me what is your aim for intrusion here?"

Little but stunned she softly replied "Sorry for intrusion I am Mu Xue, I come here from another planet I am one of space patrollers my grandfather before coming here has given me task of getting phoenix inheritance exactly in this place"

Nasir coughed and said "Let me introduce myself I am Nasir Ahmed I have recently heard from father about space patrollers I remember he said they are guardians of our galaxy, nice to meet you"

Jasmine while looking towards Mu Xue she thoughtfully said "We will not interfere with your inheritance, you can take the inheritance but you should let us escort you"

Mu Xue look towards Jasmine and said " From the moment I saw you I knew you guys aren't ordinary while Nasir seems too ordinary which seems fishy and strange, you seem like you are a fairy of nature it's certainly strange..."

Mu Xue continued "okay you guys can follow me but always be alert my grandfather told me about this place here there certainly isn't alive powerful powerhouse but there are certain powerful divine residues which can even kill saint lords"

Both Nasir and Jasmine were shocked various confusion were surfaced in their faces. Nasir with some confidence said "you don't have to worry we have some methods of self protection"

Jasmine with low voice asked him "what are you talking about? don't tell me you're trying to look cool..?!" while looking at Nasir sharply.

Mu Xue without little patience looked towards them and said "lets go!"

Both Nasir and Jasmine followed. After slowly walking 10 minutes they saw a secret ancient cave inside was large flame, phoenix flame burning a blade in ground seemed like it was suppressing it.

Mu Xue while looking at fire said "you two wait here" she moved towards phoenix fire without stopping and soon within seconds she reached the fire. Just then the fire shinned and gave out a roaring aura Mu Xue felt her power vanishing from her body her Consciousness was fading.

Nasir looked towards Jasmine and said "you wait I will rescue her I don't feel threatened by this fire at all"

Jasmine while nodding said "well go quick and take care!"

Nasir shadow vanished and reappeared before the phoenix fire suddenly the phoenix fire calmed down and moved towards his eye brows and vanished.

"Congratulations Host devouring phoenix fire upgrading host's divine sense and Cultivation base..."

"Congratulations Host cultivation getting upgrade to Supreme Nascent Soul layer"

"Congratulations Host cultivation getting upgrade to Supreme Soul-Body Integration layer"

"Congratulations Host cultivation getting upgrade to ...."

"Congratulations Host cultivation getting upgrade to Supreme Saint King layer"

"Congratulations host due to host's cultivation upgrade System rewards host Professions- Unlocks

Alchemy, blacksmith, Rune, Talisman, Warrior, Cook, Mage and profession System to Supreme Immortal Grade.

"Congratulations Host and Empress divine sense getting upgrade to Supreme Saint Emperor layer"

"Congratulations Empress cultivation getting upgrade to Supreme Saint King layer"

Nasir was overjoyed while Jasmine was shocked and overwhelmed.

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