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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

Important Things

After looking at Jasmine for a while. Nasir replied "I have been well how have you been?"

Jasmine unemotionally said "I have been well but not your mother and sister go quickly meet them"

Nasir with Jasmine quickly went into palace, there he saw 6 people chatting they were his father, mother, 2 sisters and 2 brothers. When they they looked over Nasir they weren't able to stop themselves from running towards him.

His mother and father quickly hugged him their eyes were a little red. They quickly recovered.

His mother name is Nokima and father name is Haim. He is the eldest brother and his two brothers name are Dewan and Rahul and little sisters name are Noori and Mamni. His family's everyone's family name is Ahmed.In Ahmed family its has 2 ancestors who have cultivated to legendary saint kings.(Note:-No religion in this planet)

His mother and his whole family asked "How are you Nasir are you alright?"

Nasir quickly replied "I am fine alright it's just one large realm dropped..." he don't know what else to saying.

His father said "no need to worrying you will recover soon just keep mind in peace while cultivating"

His father after a while again said "Son I hope you remember the reason you were exiled to Chaos forest..."

Nasir eyes shined "I remember I can never forget that!!"

Jasmine her eyes has always been on Nasir from him arriving him in War God's palace till now. She puts her hands on Nasir back gives him a nod.

His father Haim smiles and says "you should now go and rest we have Grand Ancestors ceremony 2 months later"

Nasir bows and wents away with Jasmine to his palace.