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The Origin of the Cosmos

Story about Primal Chaos first Origin Primal System. 1. It has sub systems like Tribe, Clan, Sect, Kingdom, Bloodline system, etc First few chapters are very fast and confusing filled with grammatical mistakes hopefully it will improve. 2. I will try to make romance less generic as possible and will add a bit of modern romance environments. 3. Sorry for story's power scale being unbalanced right now but by end of vol 1, I will balance it out to make future power scale unbalanced again. 4. Interactions is a bit problematic because of confusion in first, third person, and narration. 5. Its has harem, romance, etc it will later have more on martial art comprehension. 6. Sorry but cultivation upgrade will always be fast. 7. Will try to add humour. 8. I am writing this as I want to write a story of my imagination as I felt many things are left out in the novels I read. 9. And please join discord and give ideas and help me writing the story things you want to add. 10. My last updated chapter will always be incomplete and it will be completed when next chapter will get uploaded. 11. Criticism are always welcomed but please do it with while pointing my mistakes out exactly so that I can correct myself. Adventures to the peak of existence He who is revered as LOrd of aweSomeness. I am a science student writing literature so please give me forgive my mistakes, support and give ideas on my discord. discord; https://discord.gg/EnsFuvm

omegasensei · Fantasy
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32 Chs

Future plan

"Ding Host what is that you wish to know?"

Nasir remember in earth reading novels especially systems novels while being little embarrassed he asked " Do you have Clan development system?"

"Ding of course Host, but to activate the sub system a certain amount price and conditions are needed to be fulfilled to activate"

Nasir very overjoyed and excitingly asked "What are the price and conditions?"

"Host remember I requested you to accumulate energy? so far Host have accumulated 0.5 points by dual cultivation with empress and first consort other were sent to upgrade Host's realm. Host need one point to activate it officially and conditions are you need blood drops from each and every member embedded into "family symbol stamp" accepting heavenly degree"

"Can you explain that point accumulation thing a bit I am confused?" Nasir asked.

"Host accumulation points are pure energy which you can convert into cultivation of qi, body, soul, martial arts, active sub systems. Full Crossing Tribulation cultivation accumulation point is 0.2, Saint King is 0.4, Saint sovereign is 0.5, Saint Ancestor is 0.6, Saint Venerable is 0.7. Host can choose to break through or accumulate"

"System will introduce tribe, clan, sect sub systems and more as it is part of one system but all this systems will start from bottom that is "Tribe Unity System" also members can grow stronger by using contributing points which they can get by doing missions"

"Oh... my accumulation point is 0.5 what should I do? I can cultivate for few more months and get 0.5 points but it will be too late do you have you solution chaos?" Nasir asked system.

"Yes but for that you will fall back one great realm" system notified.

"That will be no problem my cultivation will be still be supreme saint king I can fight with opponents 3-4 great realms than me and also there is Jasmine who has supreme sovereign layer cultivation"

"Okay Host starting supreme saint sovereign cultivation sacrifice"

"Congratulations Host received 0.5 accumulation point's, successfully added "Tribe Unity System"

"Congratulations Host's current cultivation realm Supreme Saint King layer"

A seal slowly appeared in empty space in front of him written colourless "Ahmed"

"Host needs do blood ritual to fully activate Tribe Unity System"

Nasir knew even if becames powerful in future there will always be someone more stronger so now he wants to build a strong foundation for him and his family. He finally sighed and spoke "I finally know what to do I shouldn't upgrade cultivation too fast, my martial arts are too unbalanced and control is very much lacking and also point accumulation is important for future development. I should go a bit slow maybe. In the main time I should try to accumulate points as much as possible before family meeting "

He quickly went into his room and discussed with Jasmine and left to meet his father. Although he he didn't know how to explain his father he will try to convince to form a tribe.

He soon saw his father his father also look back and both look at each other Nasir opened his mouth and said "Father I have a bold Idea I don't if you will accept but it will definitely work it will save our family and help in development"

Haim startled by this suddenness and asked "what is your planning?"

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