Dear readers! I am pleased to announce the release of my new novel. I want to emphasize from the beginning that this work is a creation based on a previously written novel that you can find on my profile, in order to offer a completely new perspective and development, better and with quality writing alongside its translation. The central concept of this story is inspired by all the ideas I had about the previous story that only ended in 22 sad chapters, where the worlds the protagonist travels to are tiny. However, it is important to highlight that this novel presents a unique approach and a completely different narrative development. With the announcement of the new Hunger Games movie, I felt motivated to rewrite this novel and use some of the ideas to create this story. I put a lot of effort into highlighting the character development, where everyone will be able to understand it in the first 13 chapters, learning everything about him and his desires, immersing themselves in a unique and surprising adventure within a familiar universe. Although I share the conceptual foundation of the original novel, I have made significant modifications to the plot, the characters, and the events that take place throughout the story are not entirely the same. I had to study a lot about laws, procedures, and situations so that no one complains about the events in the beginning. I have focused on exploring new perspectives, expanding existing worlds, and developing relationships between characters that are not original. My intention is to offer new experiences in unexplored worlds, immersing myself in realms that no other writer has focused on, hoping to capture your attention. I respect and value literature, and I want to make it clear that all the chapters will be published here. Your support, if you like what I do, would mean a lot to me in my life, so you can support me on my Patreon: SrCuervo. Constructive criticism and supportive comments are welcome. Please refrain from negative comments, and I hope this story brings you enjoyment!
It's good overall. The grammar is good don't really remember any big mistakes. The story is good as well. The development is also good whit the start. And the best is updating stability because 2 chapters a day is very good in my opinion. And to the author good luck with the novel and hope you wont drop it.
The other reviews and powerstones on this novel got my hopes up, but so far this novel has a lot of problems. To start with the story takes way to long to get to the other worlds. The first chapters are just another generic edgy dark mc brooding. There are several strange inconsistencies that were off putting as well. I recommend just skipping to chapter 10 or so. The roulettes are a bit strange as the way the items work don’t seem fully explained. And finally and the biggest problem for me is their are just tons of unnecessary words and detials in this novel. There will be several paragraphs that could be said in one or two sentences. A lot of things are repeated and tons of random adjectives and adverbs are just thrown in. It made me just start skimming through large sections. Overall, if u really want a hunger games fic then go for it but I suggest skipping and skimming a lot of parts.
I liked it for a while but then it suddenly started sounding ai generated. Some monologues stretched out and too much details. i get its supposed to be this way but its just plain boring. The romance and dialogues are too predictable and the story started lacking a bit of flavor near the middle chapters.
Spent hours watching the first three worlds he world visit before reading the fanfic, hope it meets my wasted hours reputation. P.s. I will come and give a review about it if I don’t like but if there is no other review then I like and l’m too lazy to do it, cause it is 12:43 pm in the evening, and I always sleep early but I just had to watch the movies 🎥 of the worlds I don’t know about.
Honestly, I wouldn't say I like the very long beginning with descriptions so detailed that I more or less think I am reading an essay about Loneliness. But, I really like the Story when he begins to go into the Hunger Games World. I like the World and there weren't any Stories about it so this may be a bit biased. Furthermore, considering that this Author already wrote stories with hundreds of chapters I also have the hope that this won't be dropped just a few chapters into it, and the seemingly consistent upload schedule looks promising :D Nobody is perfect so while there are some things that I don't like(objectively and subjectively), I think this can be a very good Story. Just, hopefully, the author doesn't suddenly have a " Brilliant " Idea and ruin the whole Story with it.