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The Omnistore System

Author: J_a_zzy
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J_a_zzy
J_a_zzyAuthor

Shameful author here:- I wrote it so obviously I am gonna give it five stars and hope you will too, also if you find any mistakes or have some doubt do comment them in chapters or paragraph comments I read them all. Even if you don't find any mistakes or don't have some doubts make sure to give feedback I need to know what readers are likes and do not like in my work. Thanks for reading my novel.

anything_goes1
anything_goes1Lv3

good system quality lemons 🍋 pls keep posting new chapters

haki_reader
haki_readerLv2

nice system awsm r 8teen [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

SleepySmile
SleepySmileLv13

never saw anything about a shop just seggs

Jatin_Kumar_9103
Jatin_Kumar_9103Lv2

Loved it for you know cultural reasons.....[img=strong][img=strong]

RagingMutant
RagingMutantLv14

Hey author, I really enjoy your story. Aside from the few times you mix character names up it’s great. I do have one issue though. That being that you always make it a point to say that your character isn’t going to kiss a girl after she gives him head. Not only does it ruin any sort of immersion, it is also super sexist and hypocritical. It’s just kinda distasteful to read every single time considering he doesn’t seem to think he shouldn’t kiss them after going down on them.

DaoistHerbz
DaoistHerbzLv5

Thanks to this book i managed to clean my room ahead of time and get a nap after a long while. For a gigolo the MC is immature, doing SA here and there and get angry when things don't go his way. The system? aside from status and few treasure hunt it's just plain useless.

ossPd
ossPdLv1

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Almas_Farhan_Arnob
Almas_Farhan_ArnobLv4

Nostalgia, is that song in synopsis from that movie where the alien jadu seen...did you just remake that song in English

Hakujo
HakujoLv4

is mc op? .

Manish_Ladhar
Manish_LadharLv1

Awsm😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸 high quality lemon[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LemonJuice_
LemonJuice_Lv11

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

JetLord004
JetLord004Lv12

One of the best novels you will find in this app, just amazing.

RizzDaoist
RizzDaoistLv12

bro are you going to continue saga of the night God or not?

daoistzukjbklk
daoistzukjbklkLv1

👍👍👍 awsm good quality 🍋🍋🍋 🚂 stuff[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Rakesh_Kumar_0655
Rakesh_Kumar_0655Lv1

🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋🍋 ⏩⏩ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Spore_Zombie_0411
Spore_Zombie_0411Lv11

This story is a great read but we could use more visuals or images for the characters besides that the updates are both good and constent.

Ovito
OvitoLv11

I really like this novel

Vijay_Goyal_3618
Vijay_Goyal_3618Lv2

Update the discord link its expired 🖇️ please

DaoistP5qGvF
DaoistP5qGvFLv2

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