Reviews of The National Goddess Reborn
The National Goddess Reborn
Lu Yiyi
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Not appreciating the end . Very disappointed in the writer for leaving it unfinished. It was an interesting story up until the end. If I wasn't read other stories, this would have turned me off from reading Webnovel . I feel ripped off, love reading good stories this one was good until the .writer left it incomplete. Very Disappointed .[img=faceslap]
Honestly, I had great expectations of this novel, but from the first chapter it was pretty obvious it is subpar. Author seems to have attention span and writing ability of a 10year old. While idea is good, flow of the story is all over the place, author jumps from one train of thought to another without proper bridge, all characters no matter the age seem to have a brain of a chicken and rich is made to be the same as super smart/violent/hot. If none of that strikes you as irritating, how about absurdities such as: Dog was stabbed THROUGH THE NECK but sure is still alive; then there's the fight IN THE MIDDLE OF A BANQUET but nobody notices nor does anything about it; the little spoiled rich girl had her wrist broken but not a single tear or a scream is heard; and those are just the first few chapters! Now, translation is pretty decent except for the fact that Middle school mentioned in the novel should be Hight school, because middle school is for kids up to the age of 14, and our protagonist is 18... Anyways, I do not recommend reading this novel. If you're like me and can't stop yourself from reading these kind of overused plots, try something else, there are those better than this, and that's saying something... p.s. Does anybody else find it annoying that 'cool' people have to heave their hands in the pant pockets while walking? Because I've tried it and it's super awkward to walk like that..
I wouldn't say it's great but it's good enough. There are over the top dramatic and brainless characters in the novel that can be annoying at times. Also, ridiculous situations that would never be okay in real life, like beating people up in public and getting away with it for example 🥲. ✏️ Spoilers: The cool thing about the novel are the superpowers. The FL was strong in her past life luckily she's able to regain her powers in this new world. I think the ML may have powers too. He may possibly even be a transmigrating character but these are just guesses and I could be wrong. He does however know about some of the things involving powers that the FL knows about. I'm looking forward to seeing how the superpower aspect of the novel develops. I'm also looking forward to the ML and FL's interactions. They haven't officially met yet, but they've seen each other from afar (20 chapters in).
Ok, have read until chapter 148. One word for this story to date: MESSY! Positives are: Updates regularly. Translations seems ok with a few errors here and there. Superpower. And that is it? Negatives: MC is supposed to be the usual "cool" or "outwardly cold" persona that many other MC's are in other novels but it seems to fail achieving that. The MC feels like a mix of many other MC's that we may have read but it all feels superficial? The story development and it's flow is HORRENDOUS! It is absolutely messy with incorrect time frames (one moment it speaks of certain amount of time and then it is a different amount time in the next few chapters that things have been happening). I can't even tell how long she's been reborn since the months written keeps changing from 2 months and later a character mentions something about half a year or something! The author also seems to jump from one action to another without any TRANSITION. It's like the MC was doing something one moment and then it jumps to something else. It makes it feel that there are things missing in between. The plot writing have quite a few redundant words as well. I can only assume this is a brand new author (kuddos & good luck to you if so) that needs to go back to the beginning of her story and restructure her story by fixing the time frame so that the story can FLOW. As it is, reading it can be confusing when a paragraph in a chapter should come AFTER another and vice versa. Also, is the author trying to make the MC some kind of female fatale? If so, it fails. It feels too abrupt having those males all be interested in her with the very limited interaction or vibes that is written. This novel has shown the MC to be very "violent" in an annoying way when I assume the author was trying for cold and bad*ss. Unfortunately, she's just violent? I don't mind if an MC beats their opponent but this MC just lack something? So bottom line, the IDEA of the story seems interesting but it is too messy to be enjoyable. Need a lot of fixing on time flow, fix up the MC a bit to make her more "alive" and then this novel would be on a better path. I will not read it any further or recommend until it is improved.
