vtorx_0867
writing quality could use some upgrades, for example the characters names have some typos to them. not only that but the grammars could use some help for example am -> I'm some sentences need to be rewritten again. the story development is good, i can't say more because it'll become spoilers for others character design is ok the updates hmmmm are not great but not terrible either world background..... this is FGO the world is already complex as it is fyi i wrote this after I've read chap 11 ps. Buggy pulled a fast one on me, can't believe he became one of the yonkos