Hi author here, only to let you know that in my first chapter I saw some errors, still understandable. I'm busy with writing now, but I'll edit when I get the chance. please bear with me. yeah, I forgot to place "." , "," in just a few places (just in first chapters you may see some". Thanks for your support anyways, this one needs your vote.
This story has piqued my interest, but I do not know why it has been given its current rating. The author is not native to English, so I would not recommend reading this novel if you are looking for easy reading. I read what I could but have yet to find anything substantial in the story, as it is buried in grammatical errors. I will be checking on this book to see how the author improves, and I hope they continue their writing. For now, however, this novel reads like an MTL. (Machine Translation) TL;DR The story looks interesting, but the grammar needs some work.
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Just started reading this book, 4 chapters have passed, itโs great ๐!!! I also liked the begining of the story and itโs ends of chapters, hope to see more publications by its writer and team ๐๐
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Let me start with good things: Worldbackgorund is (spoiler!) not so fun, it is very well wrtitten and introduced with solid logic behind it with a pinch of fantasy. Characters: I like the development of them and thier adventures - feels kind of post apocaliptic slice of life. I must say that the MC name is kind og unique had to read for 10 chapters until I stopped reading it as โAuthorโ... Story development: I only read for about 50 chapters (sometimes skipping few) to how the author writing changed. Besides kind of cliche solo adventure start for better life, I wholly enojed the development. Neutral: Updates - canโs sat much novel at the time of review is on privildge therfore author is obliged now to regular updates so full mark here. Bad: Grammar - Iโm not native speaker but I stongly hope author got editor past 50 chapter, itโs not only the missing comas and dots. Itโs more about structure of phrases and the narrator perspective - for me it was just hard to read and I couldโt enjoy it fully. Summary: Great story with nice development, but author should really use an ediotr and better synopsis of story.
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can't wait to read the next chapterโคits a fantasy book i needed for so long and im happy to finally have the opportunity to be in this journey with you.
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I want to read this one till the end, waiting for more chapters still wondering what's going to happen to Taeyan, but knowing what's going on the earth at the same time was necessary.