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The Mask Of The Monster

Author: Proteety_Promi
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Lord_of_sleep
Lord_of_sleepLv5

Just read the first four chapters will take awhile to truly assess but very good work so far. I looking forward to seeing where the journey leads. keep it up.

AarnaReddy
AarnaReddyLv6

Auth, the story plot is amazing and the world you created is intriguing. Your writing is good and it makes me feel the world you created. I really liked the story and looking for more chapters. Guys, give this book a shot you will like it for sure. All the best auth and more chaps please [img=update][img=update]

_Meggie_
_Meggie_Lv1

Review after chapter 3! can't wait to see how this book develops! It's easy to read and the story keeps surprising me as I read! The author definitely has a knack for magical world building! Keep it up!

Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13

I was greatly attracted by the synopsis. I was very excited to know that it's not a vampire or a werewolf, it's a monster. A very unique approach and I love it. The mc has a cliche background, with the unloving parents, runaway dad, perfect stepsister and best friend with the perfect family and boring school. However, the plot allows the novel to stand out regardless of the background. I always appreciate when a novel can be cliche but unique and interesting. There were a few grammatical and punctuation errors but nothing too big to affect the plot or the story. The author could also utilize more of the show and not tell method to bring the readers into their imagination while reading. Overall, this novel has a lot of potential and a golden plot. I wish you all the best with your writing [img=recommend]

Tangerqueen
TangerqueenLv2

Really interesting story so far! I would say that some parts are a bit more tell than show, but it doesn't really take away from the overall story! Good luck with the rest of the work!

Britnee_Janowski
Britnee_JanowskiLv11

Werewolf romance is absolutely my jam and I can see how so many people love it. It's relatable. But, it's not my cup of tea. I wasn't a fan of the writing style but, that's not a reflection on the author.