ShogunOfLiterature
At first read it seems like your cliché imperial Harlem trope, but the author does really well and adds concepts that are not expected due to gender stereotypes and breaking norms while also empowering the LGBTQ community, in addition the character is also flawed so they're not mary sue but human and many things are beyond their control and in addition there's not many plot holes and this story is very educational as it's very historically accurate and you can learn historical terminology and Chinese words and culture.
Por el amor de dios, ... Nosé que pensar en detalle sobre tu escritura es como si en tu mente estuviera en forma pero a la hora de plasmarlo pierdes mucho. , Te aplaudo por tu esfuerzo pero tienes demasiadas fugas, en los cambios de escenario no específicas en detalle que sucede y si los llegas a plantar pierdes más de un punto de lo que esté pasando y el carácter de los personajes no es definido da una mierda en que pensar. Pero por lo que veo muchos gustan de esta historia. Así que seguiré observando.
Ok so i dont particularly like the writing style. The chapters are really short, not much background information and it felt like i was being told what was happening instead of it being described. At times the writing is a bit confusing and has no clear distinction of who the speaker is. The plot idea is good, it would probably be a good read for people who are patient and dosent have a high writing requirement.
An amazing BL story. This is absolutely my best friends favorite. I was told by my friend Evan to read this novel. And I have to say I think he was right this novel is really good. It is definitely a must read if you like BL novels. Continue to do good work author. The best advice I can give you is to write from the heart and though it can be stressful remember that you can do it. Best of wishes to you author. Signed Ann.