Fixten
I like this story. It's pretty good and interesting. One thing that I don't like about this story is the harem. I don't like how girls always surround the mc. I mean it's fine, but most of the time they're annoying cuz they always rely on the mc, resulting to the mc being hurt. Well, that's what I don't like. There's none other than that; I really like the story.
For someone looking for something out of the norm, this is a great read, or at least at first. The beginning features a good plot that is unique and can be followed but after the first few chapters, it starts to get wonky with all the plot holes, unnecessary plot armor and very difficult to follow plot. The grammar also turns so bad that it makes the above stated issues several times worse
*sigh* It was good, then I forgot this was a novel, meaning I needfast passes to continue reading this story... well, I DO get2 fast passes daily but the story? Meh, too much uses of cliches. LIke the "marriage" cliche, then the "Jealous antagonist" cliche, then some others. But HEY, It is a really good story.
It's alright for now but I wish the author would get a proofreader or something. Maybe they did later on in the story but early in, you can tell that the author struggles with details. A lot of details that are written in make absolutely zero sense, it might make sense to the author as they're the ones who wrote it but to the reader it is just nonsense. Definitely needs a lot of fixing up though I'm still early in the story.
This one is so-so. Shallow OP MC and even shallower harem. All the girls have been saved by MC at some point and became lovestruck instantly. The world feels empty, almost boring. The overarching concept of life on earth evolving to adapt to a mana rich world has also been done already (check out Everyone Else is a Returnee) so there's not much left to appreciate besides a pinch of RNG tattoo magic at birth and a dash of misguided self-destructive nationalism.