AuMi_Tebas
Hey the main character has light element as his main element, that is good. I got tired about those main characters always getting darkness element, it is not like light element is not powerful, for heaven sake it is opposite darkness in terms of attributes but the power they have is equal. Good job author san for making the testing of magic talent a secret thing.
The author makes a story that feels like it is real. The lack of those aspects that you always find in magic stories is good, I mean things like idiot characters. I am glad to read about a story without the so called golden fingers. The war in the story makes me excited, the spell discription is nice as well. It makes you feel that the spells have an impact.
The author has tried to keep the development of the story to an acceptable level. The story's magic system is interesting, the way the author introduced the system was good. I also like the titles that are given to the characters, it makes it funny and interesting since we have not reached the main story plots.
I have just started with the story, and so far I am liking the children of the Academy, they don't feel like children. I generally I hate having to read the childhood period of the development of the main character, this is mainly because the world perceives the main character as a child and treats him/her as such. However the author of this story had not made me feel that because as much the main character is child, non of the adults treat him like that.
The story is very fun so far, I am enjoying reading about the magic fights, the fact that they flow of fights never slows in great. The spells are launched at continuously, it makes makes the story vey dynamic. I am really liking those combinations spells, it really makes want to jump into the world of magic ring so I can fire them off.
The story is really funny in the start of the story as the author introduces the characters. I must say I like the magic system of this world very much. If you like playing as a mage in games then you will like the way the Magic Ring System works. The author does need help naming the magic rings, they are not imaginative enough.
. . . The storyline is great, the writing quality has room for improvement, reading experience is just spectacular and I love the mc(I hope the bi** Sophia dies tho) and the story is my type. You don't see original content and creativity along with realism a lot so the story is in its own corner ready to be found and shown to the world, I hope that the author keeps writing😞😞
I am a person who likes to read magic stories and this story is able to satisfy my need for it. I like the fact that the story feels realistic without the normal nonsense you find in fantasy stories. Mostly I like the fact that author never stops naming new spells, it's kind of funny how the author struggled with naming spells in the initial chapters, but they have developed to start naming the spells with better names.
The story thus far has been fun, I like where I have reached with the war. I like the impact that the war gives to me when I read the story after writing it. The naming of spells and magic rings has gotten better I must say. The initial names of the magic rings will not be changed until fans decide on cooler names.
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