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Amazing novel, everything deserves 5 stars in my opinion. So basically just read the book you wont regret it unless you big stupid.
I really like this story it just keeps getting interesting [img=coins]
Hey, I've been reading the novel a lot recently and I'm loving it. Do you have anything like a discord server for readers to discuss it further?
So good! Your English is very good and you are skilled writer. So many pages it is shocking what happens in the novel! I am so excited for the next arc, I also really like the China theme because China is good! Thank u for taking SO much time to write and be Pro
such a promising story from the start of the journey, hopefully, I won't regret it at the end of it instead of choosing another story and Thank you in advance we appreciate all the authors for their hard working
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I love this book. I was hooked on in it afyer the first chapter. Keep up the good work man cant wait to read the next available chapter [img=update]
Okay, this is some kind of cool. I've read a lot of magical fallacy stuff. But this is different. A well thought out concept with every aspect explained down to it's specific details.
LOVING THIS YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES YESYESYESYES
I have never been a fan of this type of novel but I'm in love with this book. Everything from the writing style, word use, and world description is simply on point., The author has a masterpiece here, congrats author.
While the beginning is slow, I like it, the world background and character design are also my types of writing and there is nothing bad to say about it
One of the only books ive given a 4.8 because of the wonderful plot, The title is attractive and so is the cover and well done for that! The synopsis gives a glimpse of the contents of the book but still keeps the readers dangling for more! Xuan's character is strong yet we see hues of his fate to suffer and its drawbacks, you've honestly slain this piece! (in a good way) i tried not to give many spoilers hehe
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i love noves like those, and the creator of this one did a great job, not only the characters, but the history itself is amazing i also liked how we are able to see how every character feels
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meu conselho a historia e boa, promissora, mais a narraçao em primeira pessoa e cansativa. e segundo pesso ao autor para revisar os comentarios, pois a alguns erros de coerencia, para serem consertados, como estarem no campo de trinamento, mais a magia pode destruir a sala. se estao em campo aberto??? a outra e o medalhão espacial ele tirou as coisas do patriarca, e colocou no canto da sala, no entanto captulos depois ele dis injuto ele ter ficado com as coisas do patriarca no anel, se ele tirou tudo do patriarca!!!!!!, outro detale com o medalhão nenhum mc nao voltaria ao covil para pegar o artefato luminoso, mesmo que para vender, ele nao tem grana como ele nao pegaria o artefato, ainda mais um que absorve mana auto suficiente. e o mais depois de descubrir o padrinho e junto com o torneio, mesmo que o padrinho nao tenha dado nenhum dinheiro (o que nao faz sentido) pelo menos a secretaria deveria dar um uniforme ja que ele usa magia e vai participar de um torneio com presença de outros diretor de escola, seria uma vergonha um aluno sem uniforme em um evento, vergonha para a instituiçao. pensa nessas correções, que nao altera o conteudo dos capitulos mais da mais seriedade a historia, fica a dica
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Interesting synopsis. The magic of the world seems really fleshed out, and I can tell alot of time was spent into developing the worldbuilding before you even started writing. I also like the MC who doesn't back down just because hes down on his lucky. Great novel.