nice choice of picture for your book this pic of mine is also taken from him i like how it look ..............................................
Hello author-san Can you please add 'R-18' to the title of the chapter if it was present in it?! cause for someone like me i want to know the frequency of the 'R-18' scenes in the novel. Thank you.
I havent even read the boom, But unless its trash its a 5 star for that cover LIterally that thing is beautifuL. i could talk about its magniFicence for ever
This is a great book I love is great characters and everything this book is 1# support Cyclxne All thank to him i can see potensial dont give up.
I haven't even read the book but the simple review already turned me on. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The plot is interesting. So far there are three chapters, so deciding on whether the story's development would be hard. The characters are pleasant and well described. The author seems to have ta unique writing style. With the use of uncommon descriptive words, the author was able to grab my attention. I have no complaints when it comes to the world background and stability of updates. Keep up the good work author!!!
started reading, I won't comment on style/quality of the writing or content. however the chapters are up to 628 and it just...stops. no ending no info, only a comment from the author that they might get motivated to write again if their other novel does well. yet the novel is marked as completed. I wish I looked sooner to see that it was never finished.
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This is legit the first review I have written for the hundreds of webnovels I have read. This novel is the best there are. The switches between the first person perspective between different characters gives readers a clear contrast between other novels and this one.
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My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return
My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return
This is well written. No grammatical errors and has a lot of potentials. I'm giving this five stars because I haven't gotten far in this book but I'm in love with it.
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I love the story line, keep up the good job. Though work more on your translation and check minor typos.
Really good story. Itโs not necessarily the best story i have ever read but it is quite a fun read nonethless. I like harems so that is not a con for me but it might be if you dislike them. My one big problem is just that i wish the MC would actually start a relationship with one of them. I am only on like chapter 80 though so hopefully he starts a relationship soon. The MC power is really cool and many parts of this story have gotten me really hyped Up. Overall a good story so far and i reccomend it.
Dude just by reading the layout written in the first 2 "chapters" for the races and magic, as well as explanations, I can tell this is one of the best books I'll read.
I'm in chapter 4-5 but still don't know the leading character's appearance. Author please use characterization after so that we can know what does the characters look like. From what I read you just introduce family background relationship with the MC and that's it. I don't if it you will put the character appearance and background in the later chapter. Anyway the book is good.
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I like how there's a Chinese take on the storyline of the book. Really makes for some diverse character selections with an overall interesting plot, intertwining with tradition.