The Mafia King's First Love

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I am loving this novel. Its really amazing. I'm in love with the characters and the way author is leading it is wonderful. I'll recommend this novel to readers who want to read mafia stories its the best

Wooaahhh!!!! The book is amazing a central love story,emotionally satisfying,touched my heart, While reading this book i have literally had tears of happiness as well sadness The chapters are so well described, I am so in love with this book...Thank you Author for such a wonderful book!!!!

In fact, I found this novel by chance and the summary aroused my interest, so I started reading it, but it is really good and interesting. It is clear that the author has put an effort into it....

I just started this book 2 days ago or so, and I absolutely love it, it makes me laugh and it definitely captured my full attention I realized it was 2am when I looked at the time!! oops hehe

this book is so good,I really like the plot of this story.cannot wait to know what happen between the mafia king and lihua that is about her sister.it will be sad.but I live this story.it so good .it's make me so eager and really want to read this story.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Dear Author, I just want to preface this by saything that this is my honest opinion with some constructive criticism. No hate is intented. I really like this story a lot. There is plenty of humor and funny moments that make this story worth reading alone. There is also plenty of mystery involved and interesting characters. The author does a really good job of setting up various plot points that can expand and grow later on, while also keeping the reading guessing and not giving away too much information too early. The author also builds the characters by slowly revealing bits of their background and adding more layers to their personality. Overall, this story has a lot of potential. I do have some criticisms. The story moves really quickly. The ML and FL just meet and the next day theyre in love, and a month later theyre basically planning to get married. Also, the story jumps to a major event (the engagment) so early without goving enough time to introduce new characters properly and devolpe the ML and FL’s relationship. There are other events that happen, but they happen so quickly that it doesnt make sense or seem realistic with the timeline. (Note: I have only read up to chapter 90 so this may not be valid for later chapters) The last major critic I have is for the ML. The ML is described as this super powerful Mafia King with 0 EQ. However, the ML goes beyond simply having no EQ and is actually unrealistically innocent, naive, and sometimes just plain dumb. Even if he does have no clue about anything emotional, he must have come into contact with emotional things. For example, even if he has never felt jealous, he still would still know what it is and what it means. Also, his inability to pick up on social ques and not knowing how to interact with others (i.e. knowing when he is being ripped off) is unrealitic and makes him seems underdeveloped for his age. Those type of things have more to do with intelligence then with ones ability to feel and understand emotions. I understand what the author is trying to do with the character, but it makes him seem more like an airhead and makes me question how he became a Mafia King. That being said, I still really enjoy the book and I will keep reading. It has a lot of potential and I hope the author continues to grow.

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it's very fun to read.i just enjoyed it.the characters were awwwwsome😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 just waiting for upcoming episodes

I started reading this story a while ago and it already picked up my interest. writer's story development is good though..looking forward to reading further.

You will not be disappointed to read this story. Great characters and story line is amazing. The author has created a beautiful story for everyone to love.

I was delightfully impressed. a gripping unique storyline with excellent plot twists and an acceptably large amount of face slapping.😂😂😂😂😂

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Oh my gosh! I can not recommend this story enough! The story starts off a little slow, but after a few chapters it gets interesting. The FL and the ML complement each other so well!

The story was way to unique and hot hahahaha specially from the last part wew🤭😆😆😆😆 and for the characters behavior was so challenging specially the both main character and for the next update I must say pleaaaaasssee author make it quick charrrr hahahahhaha I'm so so so so exzoooooooited even though I don't have enough coins to read I'll for the next day just to read the another one 🤭 any way congratulations 💖👏👏👏👏I hope you made a part II for the life of their future childrens hahahaha I hope my name would be used into it as the main lead hehehe

(Review after reading up to chapter 76) So far, this has been an amusing novel/plot. Can’t help but smile and laugh at Song Lihua and Jiang Wei’s interactions and thoughts. Will be interesting to see if they end up together....I find it impossible considering what Wei has done to her family. But, I guess we will find out.

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