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The Lost Returned

A mess of a story, just something I'm writing to see what I can do as I reshape my other fanfics. "Who am I, to ask for more than I deserve, good wine, a mouth to warm my co*k, and the free skies.. what do you say, brothers?" I own nothing. Tags = #2loveinterest #tragedy #action #non-powerseekingMc #strongfromstart

CrazyDemon23 · TV
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Ok, I know this could be annoying, but I kind of thought of it for a while, ever since I changed her look, but that was because I was going about it trying to make Daemon and the mc to similar.

Yet I started to make it more realistic, in the mc having his own style. That being said, I can see how a dragon like caraxes would never be that size, and of she was it would leave alot of weakness, as the neck is longer and the body is easy to attack.

Caraxes gets away with it because his size. Plus Fortassax isn't some mystical dragon, the only reason she has madness is because the mc fed her a seal.

Plus just like all living things she is old, and I mean like old ash, so having her look jet line and young kinda break the realistic nature I'm going for, everything gets old and dies.

And while she will live far longer then most dragons, I want her to have just as much personality.

So what I'm saying, is should I rewrite the lore, because the way I had it before, her being vhagers wild dragon twin sister makes it more believable, seeing as vhager is the oldest and largest dragon still alive, she could have followed her sister or had already been on dragonstone as some were before the doom.

Or should I live it as is, maybe I'm over thinking it, but I truly don't know, I've written page after page of lore of all kinds of dragons, but I still want it to be based in the setting of the known story.

Because soon I will be tell the story of how mc met, almost died, and bonded in a special way with Fortassax.

Please lmk what you think.

I'm working on chapters every day so it would help out alot.