Reviews of The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

well , mc is a guy who cries about everything and one thing that's bothering is " he keeps saying is I study magic to keep people who are close to me " joke is ... he fuucking anti social , he is a Grindelwald grandson and he can't face it head on always escaping and cursing his sorry fate (it's gets real boring) expect the nun in orphanage he has no one particular to care about that to he thinks nun is hot. so.. conclusion nice concept poor presentation and a big waste of the me.

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The author is clearly missing A LOT of important information, and is just twisting shit to make it 'AU' even if the stuff makes no sense. The MC is an annoying brat who can't own up to what he is and cries over stupid shit. There are way too many plot holes in this for it to be enjoyable to someone who has read MANY HP fics like me.

Giving this 5 stars because as of right now the writing is well done and easy to read. As well, I love the concept and the idea for the mc. Im very excited to see where you go with this fan fic, it has a lot of potential!

The MC is an idiot, has no ambition, cant even tell that he is a reincarnator.... story makes the mc i to a side character. He is nothing like grindlewald just has the looks thats all. Was a waste of time reading... shouldnt be labeled as a grindlewald fic if they act like a beta with no ambition.

Really a great fan-fic, one of the finest I read. I highly recommend to read this. Even with the occasional slip ups of character by MC it fill up with the other things I especially love the part the MC goes to parties. It will be great if the author reduces the boring training part/ secret projects and let us know how MC enjoys his days at Hogwarts or other parts of the magical world.

Excellent work! Many fanfics have a tendency to add immersion-breaking explanations or dialogues that seem off. In other words, they see themselves from "the author's point of view" and not the characters. This novel completely avoids that trap (so far at least), making it much more professional like. The conversations between the different characters is vivid and well described. The language itself is not impeccable, but close to flawless. Now onto the actual review: It is a very well written and very intriguing story. It is also very immersive, I can easily picture the scenes in front of me as I read. This could very well have been passed off as a true alternative story to the original in my opinion. I liked this very much, thank you for your work.

please continue, it's such a good book, the story,and all

Great story and I love it. But the creator hasn't been active in over a year so if you don't want to be left on a cliffhanger don't read it.

It's probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. It's a shame it is not updated anymore, I believe there was still a lot of potential.

Its a good fanfic overall and even though it can be improved at some points i still enjoyed it however one of the things that bothered me us how he cant refuse cho it quite annoying as he agrees with most of her requests eve if he doent want to

I enjoy reading your fanfic of the Harry Potter series, I'm hoping to see more of Fred's adventures, especially in Prisoner of Azkaban and Goblet of fire.

So i haven’t read, a thing except the prologue, and i think its a great idea, just to give you a tip, you better stop, save all chapters and create a new novel under “fanfiction” right now you are in the section “novel” which forces you to go premium at chapter 100-150 , and obviously you can’t go premium with copyright characters cause it’s illegal... if you continue writing here Webnovel will only remove the novel and lose everything you wrote. Transfer it fanfic section if the app

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It's a good book. The beginning does not come out of no-where and the character has realistic power stats. <3 [img=recommend]

Well, I believe that the work was abandoned as well as the content of it is currently low, so I haven't won much points with me. Maybe I like overpowers characters, but I think at least the storyline isn't a big deal these days, so that's my note.

I love it!!!!! Is one of the best fan fictions of HP that I hd read ever!!!! Please don't drop it. The writing quality may be is not the best but the story and the plot and info that is shown about HP world is amazing. I recommend 100 this fanfic

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