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The Lone Kryptonian

Waking up, I was not expecting to suddenly remember my past life as I was blasted by a robot fighting another robot which was colored red and gold. Was That Iron Man? N/A: Rewrite of In Marvel As Superman

DarkHelixDragoon24 · Anime & Comics
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Issues That Are Not Issues

This is just to let you guys know about some stuff that I have thought of while rewriting my fic "In Marvel As Superman"

The wishes

Something about them always rubbed me the wrong way, which is why if some of you remember Aiden from In Marvel As Superman went over it later on as he kicked himself in the head when he began to think about his wishes and how he pretty much could have wished for anything.

For example, there was a mention that I did about one of the wishes being about becoming a perfect mix of Kryptonian Magi and a Saiyan as a complete perfect mix or wishing about some other powers

Going back to the wishes and them irking me, they don't feel, right for lack of a better word, they, don't really feel all that deserved which is why I made Aiden in The Lone Kryptonian get his adaptation on his own, that way it feels deserved or rather earned as Aiden has done something for himself and obtained using his own abilities

The Aiden In Marvel As Superman was fucking OP as FUCK, he was cracked

He was a Kryptonian with Magic who had basic instinctual knowledge of how to use his powers, with the powers of the Perfect Sentry times 3 due to the Vita Ray Chamber, he had the Darkforce AND the Lightforce dimension under his belt, he had the power Crimson from Cyttorak, the fucking Speedforce, Doomsday level adaptation, His Sacred Gear armor, his sword which I made so fucking OP, plus godly domains, The Makulan Rings which I then made Aiden turn into one ring.

Plus let's not forget his energy absorption, which he used on the infinity stone/gems, obtaining all the benefits from each, oh, and a Lantern Ring

Yet, through all of that, I always felt that most of this power was undeserved

Yet, my biggest issue with it all is something that a lot of writers/people who I managed to get in contact with struggle with trying to get around off

Meta-Knowledge

Fucking Meta-Knowledge is such a pain in the fucking ass

This is why, the Aiden in this fic has some of it, it is not all-encompassing

Some of the writers that I managed to get in contact with said the same thing, Meta-Knowledge is a pain and for some it is a big reason why of them quit or just dropped everything in general, not the only reason mind you but one of the main ones

This is why only some stories that have an MC with Meta-Knowledge actually take off

Those without are really good

Now, I can't believe I am going to repeat myself, some of you guys may have been inspired by my fic, great. Take all of my own ideas for yourself, I don't care. So please guys stop telling me that someone 'stole' one of my stories. None of my stories belong to me either way.

Also, guys please be nice to each other

I have seen a lot of new fics about Superman or Kryptonians coming about, getting absolutely trashed and talked about really harshly, when the writers are just starting out or just doing their best

Also, for you guys thinking about writing a story, if you do begin to write, here are some suggestions

First off, don't take any shit, I have dealt with people sending me death threats on my reviews which I quickly to pictures off and just reported and I still have the pictures, don't take any shit, but do accept true constructive criticism, even if they send you a 1-star review, take it, if they are respectfully doing so

Second, if you feel burned out from writing a story, take a break, heck make another story if it helps but do take breaks for yourself

Third, make an outline for your story, that way you know what to write and then figure out how to get there