Thus is the first time of mine to write a review. Actually I love the concept. A whole new concept. Like making the chemistry elements its character ....I am surely excited for it. Author you should continue this. How about others.? Agreed right.? It was just written yesterday only. A new one. So waiting for its chapters more. Thank you.[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp]
I liked the idea and the author's approach to writing a different kind of story..... I mean after reading the chapters, i felt a new kind of joy because I really got tired of the same concept. The characters are well-built, but you have just upload 2 chapters, I want you to introduce more characters with upcoming chapters, and overall it was a good work, keep writing
I am the second one to review ur story?? Wow... Liked the concept and how the author thought about creating a new kind of story... Really got bored of this same concept and so reading this one will surely give me a new type of joy... This story is nice although there is not many chapters but l can see the potential of this book... It gave me kind of avatar types of vibes... All the best author... Hope this novel will bring you great success..
WOW! Cool Amazing! This book is so awesome and outstanding. It made me have fun from the start and I got hooked to it. The plot is very interesting, so is the pacing. The writing style is clear and easy flowing and gives you quite clear image and eady understanding while reading. Good book loved it.
The dialogues need some work. But overall the concept is GREAT!! Can't say much since only three chapters are there, but I am pretty sure author has a pretty solid plan on what to do and how to take this story to next phases. I am adding this one to the library. will be looking forward for your updates✌️
It was intriguing story from the given synopsis and it was a nice start. The grammar needed to fix in order to understand more but I know you have a potential creating unique story. I've read some of like this and it was very rare. I suggest if you want to make it lighter and more exciting, you can use onomatopoeia instead of using much punctuation. But overall, it was a good novel and highly suggested to the readers. keep up the good work Author!