Reviews of The lighted lantern (Arelins)


The lighted lantern (Arelins)


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Thus is the first time of mine to write a review. Actually I love the concept. A whole new concept. Like making the chemistry elements its character ....I am surely excited for it. Author you should continue this. How about others.? Agreed right.? It was just written yesterday only. A new one. So waiting for its chapters more. Thank you.[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp]

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I liked the idea and the author's approach to writing a different kind of story..... I mean after reading the chapters, i felt a new kind of joy because I really got tired of the same concept. The characters are well-built, but you have just upload 2 chapters, I want you to introduce more characters with upcoming chapters, and overall it was a good work, keep writing


it's a new and different concept. I'm really interested in the storyline.


This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good, but your writing technique should be improved. Keep it up! Good Luck!


I am the second one to review ur story?? Wow... Liked the concept and how the author thought about creating a new kind of story... Really got bored of this same concept and so reading this one will surely give me a new type of joy... This story is nice although there is not many chapters but l can see the potential of this book... It gave me kind of avatar types of vibes... All the best author... Hope this novel will bring you great success..


This book is good, the interactions between each character is beautiful and well done, but my only problem is how short the chapters are Thanks for the good read Author San!


WOW! Cool Amazing! This book is so awesome and outstanding. It made me have fun from the start and I got hooked to it. The plot is very interesting, so is the pacing. The writing style is clear and easy flowing and gives you quite clear image and eady understanding while reading. Good book loved it.


Wow! Brilliant writing so far. Your technique's also refreshing to read. From the few chapters I've read so far I can say you're deserving of five stars at the least. Just keep improving dear author!


A whole new kind of concepts, I like where out Author is going with this, it is well fleshed out, the characters are okay, good job[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]


First of all I want to say thank you for the authour introducing us to the world outline for the readers to understand. I love that the author has decided to do something new, though I havent read all the chapters, I only have one word for this story and that's 'Wow'


Its unique I must say, so it will capture lots of readers, currently lot of copy books are made so this might will do well. don't forget to review my book to


A captivating story. A good plot with a nice and steady pacing that makes it easy to flow with the story. The descriptions are well done and the characters are interesting to follow. Worth reading.


The dialogues need some work. But overall the concept is GREAT!! Can't say much since only three chapters are there, but I am pretty sure author has a pretty solid plan on what to do and how to take this story to next phases. I am adding this one to the library. will be looking forward for your updates✌️


Your book title is great, the plot is very strong, the Characters are well-organised, and your writing style is unique. waiting for the next chapters.


The idea behind the story sounds original. The synopsis too is intriguing. I read the released chapters and I am genuinely looking forward for the coming chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍


This was a fresh idea like mine! I just hope you will continue writing this book since it has a lot of promise. I'll keep checking back for new chapters. wonderfully done, author! Engaging characters, an intriguing universe, and a captivating narrative.


It's my second time to write a review, but I found the concept here really fun and full of potential. I'd love to see where this goes! Keep up the good work!


It was intriguing story from the given synopsis and it was a nice start. The grammar needed to fix in order to understand more but I know you have a potential creating unique story. I've read some of like this and it was very rare. I suggest if you want to make it lighter and more exciting, you can use onomatopoeia instead of using much punctuation. But overall, it was a good novel and highly suggested to the readers. keep up the good work Author!


A different type of genre although a very good story line. It keeps me interested in what's gonna happen next and what is to come.


New concepts are always enjoyable and fun to read and this was no exception~ Off to a great start, and I can't wait for the rest of the chapters to be updated too! Please don't stop writing Author, you'll do awesome! All the best >.< [img=recommend][img=update]