The Legend of the Kyubi

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Well, It is a nice story but be conscious about amount of romance this story contain. -From the beginning story is following author idea with some mix of canon. This world is more darker than original naruto -Characters are written excellently. They are not 2D dolls but humans with everyday problems etc. -No power of friendship and random powerup bullshit. So, we had our pluses. Now what I to not like about this story. -As of now (chapter 40) this story feels like **** with plot, more cuddling in bed, dates and hooking up with ladies than actual moving with the plot. Some might argue that this is character development and I would of course agree because it is but as I said FOR ME it feels like **** with plot. -This story is translated so we have some grammatical errors and mistakes where our MC in first sentence is kissing with 'her' and in the next with 'him'. So yeah, quite awkward. Anyway it's a nice read, give it a try.

This is an amazing book this is one of the best naruto fan-fics I have ever read so thank you for writing this amazing piece of art😁😁😁😁😁🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

ooooh saaaccxxxoo kami sama pffff has hahahhaha ero sennin search for his Kami Sama is the best thing in this thing..........................

You know, I am bored of standard reviews ,so I give you a nice new one format. This story consists of 3 major points. Cringe. Stupidity. And cliche. And I just give you little examples to make you feel this story trough fully. Our little not - Naruto but still dumb as original, have different eyes, fox ears and fox tail. And apparently he very sensitive with his ears. What do you think always got harrased by girls as he howls as some whatnot whore from hentai? Yeah, chapters are big so expect a lot of comedy! (oh, God) " I wanted to protect my loved ones, so that's why I will become strongest!" - imprasive! Such strong established character, it's was like in 3 chapter already?... Of course ... "Hey, my name Naruto Uzumaki and I just love to make friends and everyrime give any information that I have because I am so friendly!" - kid that was plotted by his family, and a bit tortured at extreme young age and who only have 2 people that he could trust and talk for the whole 8 years of his life! ... Because that's how it's works. Psyhologic, bitсh. Cringe drama. I can't even put it in to the words, but every review that points it's out - wasn't kidding . Some weird pedo stuff. I am not bothered by it. But it's definitely close to shotacon and sexual meaning, more than author like to admit... Stupidity. You know how hard to take jinjuriki with possible spy ninja out of hidden village? You just come take them and go away. Fucking easy, huh. Hokage wouldn't even try to stop you, even though he hate it. Apparently, 8 years kid with only 5 percent of kyubi power could easily win yondaime hokage.... Hero of 3 ninja war, that single-handedly turn tides of whole war and was feared and respected by every single kage of other villages .... How fucking easy! (did the God abandon us?) Cliche. So kushina is alive as Minato, but we have inсest tag here, what we would do? Yeah, I bet you already see such premise of the story, when Minato was scumbаg and thinks that Naruto possessed by kyubi... And of course kushina hurt. That's actually how it's goes with anko too. Apparently, student of legendary sanin, was on a verge of being raped and beaten by others ninjas of village. There is not much people that could win her, ya know. And she does have strong character.... It's a stretch but plausible. And a huge cliche for Naruto fanfics. I bet, that's would repeat with others girls a lot. Like Karin or tayuya... Conclusion. I just take my frustration by this review, yes it is still problems and glaring one. But I still think that story have actually potential. That's why I continue to read and give it another review. Especially after harem would be established. As I am fan of naru-kushi....lowly degenerate, I know. P. S. Author desire of being weeb and using a lot of Japanese words is problem too. Yeah he is like a guy that loved to use keikaku, onee-sama and etc... Fucking weeb. And it's weird how much he/she mistakes here. I mean, most of the time translation is quite good, but genders are all over the places. P. S. S. Even if I feel frustrated by this stupid start, I try to make review more comedic. Because like I say, I don't think story is so bad. And I like some parts. P. S. S. S. So why did you even did this review?! - because God has cursed me for my hubris and my work is never finished.

It's a good story for me, but some of the chapters just feel like your trying to full in stuff. I kind of dislike this mamma character the mc created too, feel like he caused more problems into himself, great story nonetheless, to me anyway.

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Story was good at first but you are starting to add fillers where i am right now and it is not the best type of filler you add when the story is getting boring at this point. I couldn't force through the chapters because of how bad i felt reading it. Hope i will be force through when i dive into other pleasurable novels and clean up the tiredness felt reading this

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I just loooove this fan fic . 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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This is honestly one of the best Naruto fanfictions that I have read (or am still reading)... Sure it's not perfect, but nothing ever is, it is pretty damned good though... Read it for yourself. *Ahem* PRAISE THE HAREM SECT, PRAISE THE AUTHOR, PRAISE GOD FOR THIS LIFE IN WHICH WE CAN INDULGE IN THE PLEASURE OF FANTASY!!!!

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Was very happy with the author when he was very quick to fix the insensitive chapter title. Now I can shut up and enjoy this work of art. Thank you.

YOU DID IT! You made on of the best novels I've read on this app. You are a legend. Grammer is great. You portrayed the characters perfectly. The plot is excellent. Keep up the good work!

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