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The Legacy System

Author: crazy_immortal
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ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

trashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrash

Jinrex5
Jinrex5Lv4

very dissapoining for a revenge novel MC only thinks with his dick prefers a low level girl or woman with a hole than a strong high level intelligent person as a subordinate so disappointing as long as its female he waste precious subordinate and slave seal on them instead of looking for intelligent and resourceful people as subordinate

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

it's really good compared to your other novel. u have really improved author. space space space space space space space space space space space

LeeZanda
LeeZandaLv12

aigo...

Gilan_Aurelion
Gilan_AurelionLv2

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havroth_traveler
havroth_travelerLv3

I've really liked reading this story so far. the premise of returner is combined with system, and the trope of everyone has a system. I'm worried the author wont be able to make the characters actions effect the larger world, because he is a 1000 year old near immortal ranked cultivator who's gone back in time.

Supremely_Innocent
Supremely_InnocentLv12

I just read the first chapter, and it's the best male lead novel I have read. I don't read much since I can't think from the brain of a male, nor can I relate. But this one really hits the ball in the park![img=recommend]

Celestial_Roses
Celestial_RosesLv1

I have not read the entire thing, but I have high hopes for this novel. It gives me much encouragement to write my own novels too. It is very inspirational and there are details that are very interesting.

shao_shao
shao_shaoLv2

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Thee_AngryBird
Thee_AngryBirdLv5

I don't know what to say πŸ˜‚πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ’©πŸ’©πŸ’πŸ˜‚πŸ€«πŸ€«πŸ€€πŸ€€πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ’©πŸ’

Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_KotikLv5

MC is literally playing PokΓ©mon with woman, gotta catch em all. In the first 4 chapters he already adds two to his PokΓ©dex and we spend the first 3 chapters with him being dead...

franchox
franchoxLv4

the first few chapters where ok, but then the whole thing becomes just too clichΓ©, contradicting and boring. The MC just changes too abrutly and even becomes just as bad as the people he wants to take revenge on. Even worse, he is supposed yo hace loved cor 1k years and his actions are somewhat dumb, I ver that being 18 can cause dime problems, but that would just be somewhat of a newsance. The world building is also badly done and I ended up skipping many parts. The parts that I cringed the most is how visible the author either has no idea how romance works or is a big douche.

LordFifthFollower
LordFifthFollowerLv13

after chapter 20 it's just young master bullshit cliches and the MC collecting women who's only notable quality is their body. waste of time

MrNewbie
MrNewbieLv15

MC is NTRed. Mc is a cuck. Mc has a green hat. .............................................................................................

JustMortal
JustMortalLv11

Reveal spoiler

Unknownuserleft
UnknownuserleftLv13

trash mctrash plotpathetic retard mc weak fk mcntrcuckolded mcmc has his lover r#ped .his brother's ntr him.mc thinking with his dongmc doesn't prepare for apocalypsemc previous life was the most retarded.his wives were r#ped by his so called brothers/friends, they kept telling him but he didn't believe them.truly a retard sh#tty fktard cuckolded mc

Iamsunny9
Iamsunny9Lv3

Well I just want to know about his past girls. who they were and how many there were. When his brother fuc*ked all his wives did they told him about it or not. What I really want to know is was he just the highest retard in the whole existence who didn't believe when all his wives told him they were raped by his brother or the girls were just sluts who didn't tell him and enjoyed the *** with his brother.

Anonism
AnonismLv15

Author does a decent job writing but the MC is supposed to be charming but in reality he is just a simp. I don't understand how the author thinks anything his MC has said so far would get any woman to even pretend not to think he is a pig, but they do and it's just an awful read honestly.

IntegerGod
IntegerGodLv11

The novels quite nice actually. Writing quality is quite good with a few word misses due to automatic grammar correction programs. One thing I'm slightly bothered by is that we haven't had any potential romantic partners(the ones that are actually spent time to cultivate love). Currently every girl that the mc spent more than a couple hours with had either been f*cked, tortured or played with. Basically this is a erotic novel that also has a cultivation story. Its a good time to read and it has been taking 10 minutes off my day every day for the last 2 months.

RXooos
RXooosLv3

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