Reviews of The last Daimon of Primus Planan

I dont really have a lot of complaints except he sometimes forgets to place a word which might trigger a few but that doesnt take away from the story too much. Im enjoying the story u have created I cant wait to see how u expand this world u have created. With great thanks to u~ DGodRequiem

So far its an interesting story and the author writes well. Especially for it being their first novel, looking forward to many more chapters!

So far so good. I’m not good at reviewing". I would like to see a hawk or something evolved into a loyal assassin if you get me 😈🤮🤠🤮👿👹👻👻🤤🤑🤤😈🤤🤠🤤👺👺🤠👺🤤🤒🤤🤮🤮😧🤮🤕👹👺📔📐📔📐🧷🧮📗✂️📚✂️📔📎📎🖇✂️🖌✔️〰️➿✖️🔝✖️®️

You have decent grammar so that’s why you got a 4. You have good updating stability to that’s a 4. You have a ok story development, I would wish if you did more research on bears and animals that you use also more action besides him talking about breeding his army all day. I love the character design it’s great but you could give more detailed information on how they look. Lastly we don’t know much about the world at all. I hope you get more into the world soon.

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