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Reviews of The King's Mandate: Anomalous System

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The King's Mandate: Anomalous System

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Pointbreak
PointbreakLv15Pointbreak

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Akichi
AkichiLv6Akichi

OK, this is my second review on this novel, and although it is mostly the same thing as before, I have to say that the author's foreshadowing are worth looking into even if the start is somewhat horrendous whenever the Mc isn't around his parents or girlfriend. Overall, a great romance story, the author even being able to pull off a difficult tag such as harem thanks to his character creation abilities. Those guys grow on you like a fungus, but in a good way. The Mc himself is sometimes infuriating, but as you watch his thought process for longer, you will inevitably understand what the author is trying to make of the reader-MC connection. I could talk more about this or that development, but just the fact someone pulled those kinds of plot points successfully makes me want to femboy, nevermind the respect that blossomed from all the proper discussions and dialogs, which lead me to write this relatively long review and not want to hide it behind some block.

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

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DaoistTamashii
DaoistTamashiiLv15DaoistTamashii

Fazit first (200 chapters): It is an interesting story, worth reading. The story starts very chaotic in the early chapters. Many things seem to make no sense whatsoever. Over many chapters the reader learns more and more about the multi layered secrets around system, VR as well as real world with their royalty. The characters seem emotionally scarred with many callenges. At Ch 200 things are far from solved, but there is at least some clarity about the situation and the background. History seems to matter quite a bit, and it comes to light bit by bit over time. The reader learns about (almost) everything with the MC - step by step - and there are very few 3rd party POVs explaining things. The story is a good read so far and I will write another review once I reach the current chapters. Around chapter 200 things seem to kind of "start off" and get even more interesting. There are lots of weird things in this story, but I believe the author will solve everything in due time. So: My recommendation - go for it! The novel has romantic content and mild sexual themes (on the level of kissing, petting and making out including felatio) which should be rated R-16. (up to ch 200, I have not yet read beyond)

Dummygg1
Dummygg1Lv5Dummygg1

First of all, WN recommended this, so I just skimmed through within 15 mins. First few chapters already put me off. The guide AI is insulting MC a lot. There's no cuteness in it, it's a pure annoyance. If I started a game with this kind of setting, I will just quit this game and find a better one.

divinrth
divinrthLv13divinrth

ok i'm liking it so far, but god damn is it annoying reading how obsessed das is with elena. like, he saw her die in a video game and he felt like his soul was ripped out? give me a break man. one of my biggest pet peeves in novels are overly emotional and romantically obsessed protagonists.

NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv5NatsumeRikka

I have read till chapter 47 and as a fellow author, I appreciate the efforts put down by this fellow author. When you read the story, you will learn that it was written. Yes. And when you imagine the scenes, you will learn that the author also imagined. Yes. (ο½žοΏ£β–½οΏ£)~

Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5Crazy_Cronie_1

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it.. 5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack. 6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments. 7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter 8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus) cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro) 2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it. 3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what. 5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO: - maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read - RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4) update: 8.5/10 (con-2) plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8) pacing: 8/10 (con-6) dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!! And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC may seem a little edgy. - rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil - sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho) - mc is dense af!

DANI_ESC
DANI_ESCLv3DANI_ESC

I like this novel a lot. It's amazing. The only thing that I don't like is the harem.πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ˜€πŸ˜  It would fine if Das was just with Elena or at maximum with Elena and Lier. But now we have an AI, the teacher and a lot of girls near him.😀😀 That's what I don't like. But except for that, great storyπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘

PillGrandCreator
PillGrandCreatorLv15PillGrandCreator

This is a well thought and well written story that takes it’s time to setup and build not engaging in mindless action. The characters have depth and are explored nicly along with the story. normally I don’t like game novels but this Book stands out especially in characterization and character interaction. this book deserves more attention pls share and reviwe so the author can continue to make quality work. Recommended. Now go and read!

Nate_Gong_3073
Nate_Gong_3073Lv2Nate_Gong_3073

i might be here to complain but not about the novel, I'm here because i hate locked chapter, who wants to spend $600 to read a single novel, when you can go buy a normal book that's larger and 1/20 the price

xeriou
xeriouLv4xeriou

The story is just so good. It just keeps you wanting for more. But the author is cruel, cutting when it is about to reveal an important info.

Shaun_True
Shaun_TrueLv15Shaun_True

This book has had me gripped from the first chapter. It is do well written and the characters are amazing. The unorthodoxy of this book gives it a wonderful charm and i consider it one of my favourite books I read. Well done author, Mad respect for uou!

FitToBeDeemedGod
FitToBeDeemedGodLv2FitToBeDeemedGod

first of all this is a great book, sure it takes some time for the story to attually get the ball rolling but it is definitely worth the wait. also I would like to mention that the mc is kinda clueless about a bunch of stuff and I just want to say be patient with him. 10/10 highly recommend.

Noise
NoiseLv14Noise

Did the novel change its title name? Seems to be focusing a lot on romance and harem. A lot of drama, mysteries. Kinda chaotic. pog..

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv13AvidReader962

Overall this is a very enjoyable story, well written besides an error here or there, but those are ignorable, with a very interesting main character who becomes more likable over time, some interesting love interest, and a dash of mystery that’s fun to think about. I think this is a story you should definitely give a try, you might have fun with it to be sure, but make sure to read the auxiliary chapter to avoid any momentary confusion.

_VA_
_VA_Lv4_VA_

The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator. A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.

Scripture02
Scripture02Lv10Scripture02

Since Idk if this has discord then imma ask it here. How many will there in the harem? Im planning on reading it and just had to ask that question bc bigger the harem usually means they get forgotten along the way. Hope it isnt the case tho.

XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv15XxErnestoxX

BE WARNED AUTHOR is deleting everything below 4 or 3.5 stars. This story is so bad dont waste your time and money. It was supposed to be a vrmmo game story but now unnecessary mystery and romance drama.

Phyrst
PhyrstLv2Phyrst

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Io started it thinking it was just another virtual reality thing without any sort of appeal, but it turns out it's a totally different story with unusual development and great, great - did I say great?- writing and good character design. The world building starts and develop relatively slowly but you will almost never want to skip a paragraph, so I can't say it's really slow (unless you don't like the few '****-romance' dialogue between protagonist and girlfriend, which, however, I think are extraordinary well written for a novel) Tu sum it all up, awesome! Keep up the good work, author!