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Author, I gave you five stars for your writing quality and your story development, because your story goes very smooth, like butter. I love the way you wrote a short but strong synopsis, something I think a lot of us are struggling with right now. And to be honest, the cover gives me quite umbrella academy or stranger things vibes, and so does some of the chapters. I love this story and am happy I invested time reading this. Though I am quite distraught on how you didn't get recognized earlier, you're a great writer with amazing descriptions.

Writing quality is superb, plot development and character personality is cool interesting story I love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😊

The story is intriguing and makes me feel like I am watching an incarnation anime but with better details. Honestly, good job author! It kind of lures you(reader) in....

Very good work by the author, the character design, dialog delivery, and the plot everything was just great. Loved your work and looking forward to furthering updates.

All your stories are amazing and captivating this one is really good the plot to the characters to the genre I love everything so please keep up the good work 😉

To be honest i really like stories with plot in which the FL goes back in time but i just gave a try and i also liked tour story like its with a twist that involes past and future

Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.

The book cover was enough to capture me. Everything about this book is great. The author is doing a great job, keep it up. Five stars from me.

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love it love it am waiting for more chapters , The writer us doing a great job keep it up . the book is so intriguing love it . I totally recommend this please don't skip

The title is very intriguing. I like how it starts with the hawk and moves into the house. The story is well put together and conjures up curiosity led questions that keep the readers engaged. Well done author.

The overall storyline is really creative and nice. Keep up the good work. I haven't read a lot but I'm sure the book is nice from the little that I've read so far.

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The story concept is very intriguing so far. I can't wait to read more to see what will happen next! Thank you to the author for this original story, full of interesting characters and story development. There's a sense of mystery behind every chapter and I absolutely love it!

Author, you did a great job, the story introduction is very good. I never read a love story before but after reading a few chapters of your work, I am looking forward to reading more chapters

Your intro was KILLER! That was the best intro I've ever read to a story on this website, and I'll definitely be looking into strategies I can apply to my own work. Seriously, beautiful job. It's in my collections, and I can't wait to read more!

Author here. Alright weird giving a review on my novel but felt I should say what's it's about without much of a spoiler. The primary focus will be on time travel/ tune loops created by the MC to try and 'fix' certain events in time. The plot's gonna be quite dynamic ranging from slice of life to fantasy. Plenty of action is also guaranteed. Romance isn't a main plot point and shouldn't concern the MC. You'll just have to read to find out what's in the book. Happy reading y'all!!!