Reviews of 24794691606075305

I know it's too early to give a review, but I really wanted to do it as I noticed something that the author should've known. So first of all, change your book cover and make it more captivating to urge people to read your novel by only having a look at the cover, it will increase your valid readers too. Secondly, please shorten your paragraphs, or else a reader like me will just ignore them, considering them too long to read.😁 Yeah the plot was good, but you need improvement to make it even more enthralling🤷‍♀️

The story is developing. Still, the author has written the posted Chapters well. I hope he/she continues writing the chaps. The novel is still in development but i hope the author gets it right.

interesting concept and world background and characters are well described and writing quality is also okay and keep updating new chapters 👍👍👍👍