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the story starts off quite well. i hope the other people besides main and side characters will have more "color" as they seem bland and well they don't even have names. the main character is also very bland. we only know his name and background. we don't know how tall he is, what is the color of his hair or eyes or what kind of face structure he has. the background of the world seems interesting and i hope there will be chapter to explain more how the universe and galaxies are structured and how they are connected to the other realms/plains. the only really bad and annoying part of the novel is that the writing quality is bad and the writer isn't consistent with the story. in the realm where the mc fights the insects he somehow had a wooden spear. there was no explanation how he got it and next he found a blade from a dead guy. first he calls it "long knife" and then he calls it "long blade" the spirit of the mc is spear type and i hoped he could've just used the wooden spear, of course i understand that a blade made of metal is stronger but he had no idea how to fight with blade and he had instincts from his past life to help him fight with spear so the change of weapon didn't make much sense.
I am enjoying this story so far... Great development of plot.. There is spirits, beasts, reincarnation which made this story more interesting. what piqued my Intrest the most was MC's last life... although there is no details about his last life till now, but from the looks of it, I know it will be filled with Mysteries. I also want to know about MC's relationship with the mysterious lady!! Please speed up the update and let us, the readers, enjoy your story!!
Writing Quality: There are some minor mistakes but the real problem I have is that the writing isn't really smooth, I can't just feel the story when I read it, the quality is average Story development: So, the mc is not really mature, which I prefer, but he is still a child so it is acceptable. There are a few things I really don't like, first the stuff with his mother and her family, that was just wierd and you should change the story because it doesn't make sense. Second is the trust with his teacher, nobody should trust each other so easily, I mean yes the teacher knows his secret, but we don't know why she is helping him, is it because she is special herself? And that she just trusted him so fast don't make sense. Character design: He is immature, childish and a bit stupid, I hope he will get soon mature and the bearing of a true king and get stronger soon. I don't really like stupid characters, and his lying skills are so bad, and that nobody can tell that he is lying with his cultivation techniqe is really sad and should be changed. Update stability: 8 chapters a week is really good, I can't complain with that, 5 stars for that. World background: We only know that the universe is really big and we can't comprehend how big it truly is, we know that his planet is nothing but a small planet which is really weak. Hope to get more informations for that, but it is still just the sart of the story. Overall: The story has potential, but the problems which I explained, is the reason I will drop this novel, I just don't like the writing style, I can't bring myself to read it or pay for the chapters. I would recommend you to give it a try if you want, the first 40 chapters are free.
he story starts off quite well. i hope the other people besides main and side characters will have more "color" as they seem bland and well they don't even have names. the main character is also very bland. we only know his name and background. we don't know how tall he is, what is the color of his hair or eyes or what kind of face structure he has. the background of the world seems interesting and i hope there will be chapter to explain more how the universe and galaxies are structured and how they are connected to the other realms/plains. the only really bad and annoying part of the novel is that the writing quality is bad and the writer isn't consistent with the story. in the realm where the mc fights the insects he somehow had a wooden spear. there was no explanation how he got it and next he found a blade from a dead guy. first he calls it "long knife" and then he calls it "long blade" the spirit of the mc is spear type and i hoped he could've just used the wooden spear, of course i understand that a blade made of metal is stronger but he had no idea how to fight with blade and he had instincts from his past life to help him fight with spear so the change of weapon didn't make much sense.
Interesting novel. The armor plot is also amazing. I like the way MC is introduced in this novel. Although he is thr reincarnation of a mighty figure, he don't have any memories of his past life. the Infinity symbol slowly let him experience his past life. The appearance of the mysterious lady was the thing that caught my attention the most. what exactly is the relationship between the mysterious lady and MC?
So far so good, to me the story is above average. I like the concept of the story but the execution of it is below average. Certain things are rushed and the author tries to build an air I mystery but he did a bad job at it. The tension is less as the character descriptions. But the concept is very good and it hooks a reader wanting to read more about what will happen next.
Well, this novel is just unique. The character development so far is very good. I just hope that author will continue to publish the chapters and not stop. It is very good novel, I strongly recommend it. The concept of this novel is also very good. It just piqued my interest. I want to know what kind of character MC will turn become in the future and what is his past(I mean past life)... Waiting..For.. More.. Chapters..
Well, this is an interesting novel. I like the starting of the story as well as the plot that follows the MC. The novel gets more interesting when MC suddenly travels to the cultivation world from earth... I just want to know more about his past life and how he died. what is his relationship with the mysterious lady and what exactly is the Infinity Symbol? I hope I'll be able to get my answers soon.