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To be honest, your story is the superior version of the Blue core, and no I am not accusing you of plagiarism it's just that I don't understand why royal road won't allow such fine work. I love your story and would probably stick around till the end.
this novel has everything i look for, the character development and the overall story makes sense, the MC is not a retard. It has adventure, action, fantasy and r18, everything i ask for.
Very good
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Я читал многие книги и только несколько из них заставило так преданно следить за новыми главами .Книга очень интересная захватывающая , развитие происходит в хорошем темпе , не быстро ,но и не медленно . Также мне нравиться что предусмотрен мировой фон,хоть рассказан он не очень подробно ,но я думаю у автора уже есть заметки на этот счет.Меня заинтересовало ,как же все таки он поступит с демонами ведь с ними он еще не разу не встречался(хотя это не избежно).Радует то что главы выходят каждый день ,хотя не каждый день получается их читать,что очень расстраивает . Хотелось бы чтобы больше внимания уделили именно подземелью и его развитию( новые материалы, новые ветви промышленности, хранителя подземелья назначит или что-то еще ), а так же внимания к ГГ ( может оружие себе выберет , монстра собственного для езды заведет или доспехи ,а может еще что-то) Книга очень интересная и увлекательная.Жду продолжение!!!!!!
I can tell you the story is beautiful, but the speed of the update is slow. :( I hope the author will speed up the release of the chapters..................................................................
i started reading this because i was down bad but the characters and the story kept me going. havent had this much fun reading a novel on this site in awhile. Keep up the good work author
Really well made story would recommend to my friends (if i had any). xD xD Kill me
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It is good. When I picked it up I did not think it would be so easy to just keep reading it. The story is exactly what I wanted from a dungeon type webnovel. Characters are good but I wish we had more of them.
I aint gonna lie this a very interesting story. The concept is very interesting! Though hope if the author has a chance to update faster, but if it messes with the quality rather it stay the same.
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Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in 2 week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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well I love the book and where it's going so keep it up. and try to have some bonding time with the girls. that's all. overall I love it and write it how you like. I'll follow it.
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