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The Idle System

Author: Pegaz
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skylarias
skylariasLv4

The MC is a sociopathic idiot. He accidentally kills an innocent man, whom he had gotten along with, and he can't stop himself from giggling because he got away with murder. He also spends the first part of the story walking around naked, until someone points it out. How do you not notice trees, brush, and the wind hitting your private parts? Or look down at yourself once when you're picking something off the forest floor. The world building is also lazy as ****. The kingdoms are simply divided into North, South, East, West, and Central Kingdoms. He also gives a ridiculous amount of money to the innkeeper for letting him use a room for two years, nevermind that he literally spent the entire two years in the forest hunting creatures to local extinction. Then he spends an equally ridiculous amount on gloves. Two years of earnings from killing creatures. On gloves. The money system in this game is not relative at all. The gloves are millions of times more expensive than a night in an inn. Its like the author has no concept of money.

cutefoxybird
cutefoxybirdLv4

Reveal spoiler

SaintOrder
SaintOrderLv14

Nice novel to binge read. 140 characters characters are the same as the one who is the first to admit that the first time you have seen this one before and you have to be in charge of the

OverlordOfTheSword
OverlordOfTheSwordLv5

Good novel πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

GodsHolyWisdom
GodsHolyWisdomLv5

Very good novel so far I'm really enjoying it I hope the updates in chapters keep on coming I can't wait to find out what happens at the end :).

NekoNemui
NekoNemuiLv13

It is a well thought out story. My only issue is that I don’t like the way the character is going as of yet. I look forward to the continued updates.

YouNeedToGrowUp
YouNeedToGrowUpLv2

My large saber is again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thirst! Kidding. Saw and was clickbaited by the word Idle. Read and now stayed. Guess you found yourself a new reader.

VoidListener
VoidListenerLv3

READ THΔ°S NOVEL you will like it more or less dont except something like tolkien or lovecrafts work but this can be something like that for light novels in future dont miss potential.

Tumeke
TumekeLv6

Definitely the most entertaining original novel I've read on here, although it probably isn't for everyone. This novel reminds me of re: monster. One problem I have is the mc's morality as it is kind of convoluted. My biggest problem with this novel is that grammar/prose/whatever isn't up to snuff. Author consistently slips into present tense and frequently uses brought in place of bought to name a few. Other than that it's great and it would be much better with an editor/proofreader

Slient
SlientLv15

An awesome story, though the mc is too op and the plot is fast. The story is easy going and relaxing. A nice novel for read during past time.

Issthfan
IssthfanLv5

would u waste 2 years of hard work in 5 mins and say easy come easy go ? would u give people 2.5 millions Β£ for almost nothing ? would u pay 20M for clothes ? if u would do that then this novel is for u πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ just a novel to waste time i wanted to give it 1 star but it made me laugh so here u go

SilentScream
SilentScreamLv12

A lot of potential, probably the best among the ******* work and with a bit of polishing and refinement it can pass as a professional work, heck it's way better than some "professional" works you see around!

SirVic
SirVicLv6

The writer brings a fresh story of a reincarnated person with a system. The interesting aspect so far is that in this world people that are reincarnated are known (Siders) and there are others. The Story has not yet really explored the interactions and conflicts amongst siders. The story development so far has not really given the MC any major challenges. The growth has been smooth and no rivals,grudges nothing.

willybwonka
willybwonkaLv5

Needs more edits for grammatical checks and in some cases sections of the story are hard to understand from the readers POV. Great story though.

Akai
AkaiLv4

Its good novel but so complicated there is so much stuff I doubt anyone read all of them :) you can shorten them dont emphasize to make more stuff it doesn't make novel more cool rather its make complicated.

SpiritSovereign
SpiritSovereignLv5

i am really glad with the progress the writer made and i hope to see a lot more from this particular author, Keep It Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HeavenlyPervert
HeavenlyPervertLv14

Has very good pace. Staright forward novel. Character is not a stupid c**t poking his nose in everyone's buisness. Keeps calm and thinks logically. Will seem to get OP too quick at first. But that's the point of the system in the novel !

Bjoerg
BjoergLv12

It's awesome. It's relative fast paced but that's good. Here we do not have the 100+ chapter in the mortal world unlike alot of other cultivation novels.

ReddoNagaiyo
ReddoNagaiyoLv5

Awesome story with consistent chapters, love the characters and the world. Especially the mc, the guy is right up my alley he isn’t a horny teenager nor an edgy asura with obsession to kill everybody. Read it, you won’t regret it.

FluffyWhite
FluffyWhiteLv11

Just started reading this today and i have already read to the latest chapter. NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!! NEED MORE!!