not sure why it is discontinued, but I really liked this book. the writing could use some improvement but overall I had fun reading this. would love to buy it if it is available in any other location
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Everything's pretty much perfect and well written. If there were more chapters I would be a lot happier but sadly I haven't seen any new chapters for the past week or so maybe even month.
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A good LN that has a pretty decent story it's nothing special it's just I like because it's just a turn your brain off and read kind of story and those are my favorite type and there's a whole lot of decapitations π
read up to 58 chapters. I liked how the story starts but later on, the story became bland. mc does nothing but kill, interrogate, find the place, and kill again. he just massacres everyone in his way, but in almost the last 20 chapters that I've read the same repeats. I've lost motivation to read anymore.
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I read till chapter 49 before I gave up. The writing quality is average. The translation is good but the actual writing is pretty dull and repetitive to the point I skimmed and skipped a lot of the fight scenes. Dialog is the same when it occurs. A lot of telling not showing happens in this story but still doesn't tell you much of anything of value. I didn't read up to the point where updates would matter. Honestly, this story's MC acts like a knockoff version of John Wick. It's pretty boring. His OPness at least would have made more sense if he received the game system in the dungeon and leveled for 400 years. He's an idiot. Instead of doing some research into the new society and spending time with his family he's an arrogant young master that immediately catches the eyes of others and endangers his family. Yes he has centuries of combat experience but he shouldn't be taking on entire guilds of higher level than him so so early in the story. The story barely shows you the game system, he gains levels way too quickly, and there is little world building that occurs. Basically a Gary Stu story with a 2-D background for his "slaughter sprees of justice".
This story is a very good story about hunters but the grammar is incorrect a lot of the time. overall there is a huge room for improvement and the pace of this is not too fast but not too slow. The fight scene are kinda just description of the battle along with some sound words
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The story is quite cliched, but not bad. I enjoy stories like this. But unfortunately, I can't read it. Wrong words everywhere. Grammar is quite bad as well, even for me who is not a native speaker. This story really needs heavy editing.
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I really enjoY the main character, he is really dark and has a deep bloodlust for anyone that wrongs him or his family I am curently at ch. 40 and there is no harem developement, take that as you will. My biggest problem is the frequent typos where letters are missing or swaped with some other letter, it hasnβt been uncomprehendable but annoying.
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The only thing that kept me reading is that I like the dungeon esc stories but everything else, default to the very structure ...............................................................................................................
Alguien me explica como una persona que paso 400 aΓ±os en el infierno no pueda con una persona de nivel 25!!!! Por dios que coraje que asco de novela y dicen que se tiene que adaptar pero madre tampoco asΓ
wow, the author caught my attention just from the synopsis. Really enjoying reading novels that include all kind of creatures and beings and this one has just that .... Great job
WOW This novel is brilliant!! plain extravaganza if you ask me. characters are just awesome and strongly portrayed by the author. KEEP IT UP!